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Deeen7dCommentedi know it!!!
[Countdown set for 168:00:00 (1 week)]- Deeen7dReplied to SleepingSwallow
you never go to school brother?
Axel's stats have been increasing too much. He already had the looks. But then he worked hard and slowly improved his academic abilities until he climbed to the first position last year. His looks have improved and he's tall and muscular instead of his earlier short and skinny body. Now he's also a seeker in Quidditch. So, of course the bitches are now flocking around, smelling meat, and Daphne absolutely hates it! Especially because they didn't see the good in him when he was still injured and malnourished. Compared to these girls', even Martina is much better. - Deeen8dReplied to Orion_Art
im ok with everything hehe, just dont drop this fic
It was going to be a long day. - Deeen9dCommented
10 % is too little dont you think? what about the oprational cost?
Ava clicked her teeth upon seeing the prepared magic contract with the sum of 10% already to her name if she signed. - Deeen9dReplied to Midxcha
together?
"I don't mind." - Deeen9dCommented
so nice to be young
How did it get there? - Deeen10dCommented
my feeling telling me that zach also related to this onyx
'Xavier Hall.' - Deeen11dCommented
its good bro, but what about add something like sound effect like when he clash his sword add a sound like 'CLANGG!!!', or when he slash someone, idk if that is good or not but its up to you brother, i just hope this is not dropped bcs i found this novel entertaining to read
Also, do you guys have any feedback on the fight scene? This was my first time writing one so I'm kinda nervous about how I did it. Did you like it? Not like it? Any advice on what to do and improve if not? - Deeen13dReplied to Beast_eye
also try his new work its called memoir of the returnee, its also good novel
The thought of touching the puke seemed more repulsive than the fear that was clouding my mind. - Deeen14dReplied to Aichi_Sendou_8125
exactly my thought
"These guys..." - Deeen14dCommented
finally some plot, im tired of catching all that pokemon
"Kill all of them and take that girl in as a slave." The world Noble commanded to the one beside him. - Deeen14dCommented
what the... is this pokemon fic? its been 28 chapter and there is still no plot in this pic
"Then join my crew!" Ace said happily. - Deeen14dCommented
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In about three years, a rookie pirate will start sailing. He is kind hearted and will become a force to be reckoned with." Ace said. - Deeen14dCommented
it would be funny if luffy dies in the sea because he take nami from luffry
"Because Nefertari D. Lili's ally, Joyboy will soon return and fight her enemies, isn't it obvious whose side you'll be on" Ace said. - Deeen15dCommented
this is cringe especially he know luffy did that, but i will just ignore this and act like this moment never happen, i like romance, even encourage it in every story brcause that is normal in every human being but dont do it like this, they just meet, its diffrent from luffy he already know nami and going for short adventure together
"Keep my hat for now, it's raining." Ace said before he turned around and walked into his chamber. - Deeen15dCommentedCh -1 Chapter 0. introduction
- Deeen15dReplied to Siddharth_Goli
try struggle of the weak (completed), struggle of the weak reboot, and white hunter, all of that fanfic by bravobuds
One thing I dislike about One Piece fanfics, is that they often begin early in the story then it takes like 40 chapters before the Canon start..and then We'll have to read through Zoro-nami-Usopp-smoker arcs. And then when the characters finally reach paradise or new world.... Only then is the story dropped. - Deeen15dReplied to Deeen
i dont know if lightning is fire or not lol im not good at science, but i remembered that in avatar lightning is the next level of fire bender, i mean if you make his mastery over his devil fruit means he can control more of his element then why not, its always interesting if you put science in the power up in one piece, like luffy second gear.
First of all, his Mera Mera no mi.... realistically, it should be way hotter than any puny magma can be. Sure, normal flames we are used to is not as hot as magma, but flames can reach the temperature of the outer part of the sun before turning into plasma. - Deeen15dReplied to Passerby_Venne
if you can make fire fire fruit turn into plasma, can you also make it turn into lightning?
First of all, his Mera Mera no mi.... realistically, it should be way hotter than any puny magma can be. Sure, normal flames we are used to is not as hot as magma, but flames can reach the temperature of the outer part of the sun before turning into plasma. - Deeen22dCommented
niceeee, i like it this way, hashirama cell is overrated
Yuto was highly cautious about operations like "transplanting Hashirama cells."