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Nikolas_Hernandez

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  • Nikolas_Hernandez
    Nikolas_Hernandez1yr
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    This novel is amazing. I should be enjoying it a lot... right? c1-c100 SPOILERS Well, I'm on chapter 100, and I'm pissed. For the first 100 chapters, Khan develops a really strong bond with Martha, and they're both very likeable characters. In the novel, it's ~6-8 months that they were together and bonded. They talked daily, and used eachother to support themselves emotionally. Martha cared about Khan so much she got the Leuitenant to mentor him because of a debt he owed Martha's father. After the tragedy, I understand Khan's crisis. Martha may be the same person after she recovers, but Khan can't claim he's the same person. He's growing and changing, and insecurity plagues him. HOWEVER, what the author CANNOT JUSTIFY is the fact that, just a week after leaving Martha, he FALLS IN LOVE with a girl IN ONE DAY. ONE. FUCKING. DAY. Are you SERIOUS!?!?!? The author builds up all these characters, including Martha, only to show that Khan is the most shameless bastard on the entire planet? He has s3x with this girl shortly after, even justifying his actions with "Eh, i've changed, Martha will be alright." ????? This is disgustingly unforgiveable. I would've liked Khan's relationship with Liiza, MAYBE, if it was drawn out and developed, and it didn't take 2 DAYS for them to start f3cking. Also, I can't tell if it's a harem, but by c100 I would be suprised if it wasn't. The way MC goes around f3cking girls and kissing them (or letting them kiss him EVEN WHEN he's WITH MARTHA at the time (justifies it with bullshit)) is giving harem vibes. So, for anyone who cares: WARNING: HAREM.

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    Chaos' Heir
    Fantasy · Eveofchaos
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  • Nikolas_Hernandez
    Nikolas_Hernandez1yr
    Replied to Trueon

    Hey Trueon. Ever since your comment I've read the webnovels you've recommended, and like some of them. Do you have any more recommendations (Book, Webnovel, or CN/JN/KN), that are up to the same standard? I'd love to talk; my discord is Battalion#0761

    altalt
    Shadow Slave
    Fantasy · Guiltythree
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  • Nikolas_Hernandez
    Nikolas_Hernandez2yr
    Replied to Alekzi

    Don't change his looks author! He looks great! It's refreshing to have an MC who looks different. Plus, I'm sure his more feminine attributes makes his badassery seem even more badass. Lol.

    altalt
    White Online
    Games · Alekzi
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  • Nikolas_Hernandez
    Nikolas_Hernandez2yr
    Posted

    This novel's amazing! I'm suprised that I've decided to give this novel a review, since for the first 25 chapters, I was convinced it was one of the worst novels I've ever read. Yes, it starts off TERRIBLY. But the author improves, and to be honest, it's REALLY good right now. All I ask is, author, PLEASE do not make this a harem. One of my FAVORITE things about this novel is the quippy, light-hearted yet emotional friendship the MC has with his male contemporaries (you know who I'm talking about, plot armor MC lol). It's very wholesome. DON'T make this about catching all the girls as they fawn over him. DON'T justify harems with "eAcH of tHe GiRlS hAvE tHeIR OwN pERsoNalIty!" Please. I love the pacing. If it continues at this pace, it will go on for quite a while, but I don't care. The pacing feels amazing. I got scared when at the end of volume 1 you said "From now on, the pacing will be quicker," because I loved the second half of volume 1. But volume 2 was also great, so props. Good job author!

    altalt
    The Author's POV
    Fantasy · Entrail_JI
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  • Nikolas_Hernandez
    Nikolas_Hernandez2yr
    Replied to NoWoRRyMaN

    Why would anyone label their novel a harem. I cry inside every time. I'll give it a try, but if every character that the MC gets close to is female, I'm quitting. Disgusting.

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    Gods' Impact Online
    Games · NoWoRRyMaN
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  • Nikolas_Hernandez
    Nikolas_Hernandez2yr
    Posted

    Love it! Worth reading 100%. I hope you don't drop it anytime soon!

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    Elite Mages' Academy
    Sci-fi · The Final Fool
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  • Nikolas_Hernandez
    Nikolas_Hernandez3yr
    Replied to KatjeSasja

    Just wanted to say I love you @KatjeSasja... I've been looking for novels and searching through your comments on ur profile I have found over 10 great novels... appreciate it <3

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    The Challenger's Return: Rebirth of the Rainbow Mage
    Games · NightWind
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