Nikolas_Hernandez
of reading
158
Read books
This novel is amazing. I should be enjoying it a lot... right? c1-c100 SPOILERS Well, I'm on chapter 100, and I'm pissed. For the first 100 chapters, Khan develops a really strong bond with Martha, and they're both very likeable characters. In the novel, it's ~6-8 months that they were together and bonded. They talked daily, and used eachother to support themselves emotionally. Martha cared about Khan so much she got the Leuitenant to mentor him because of a debt he owed Martha's father. After the tragedy, I understand Khan's crisis. Martha may be the same person after she recovers, but Khan can't claim he's the same person. He's growing and changing, and insecurity plagues him. HOWEVER, what the author CANNOT JUSTIFY is the fact that, just a week after leaving Martha, he FALLS IN LOVE with a girl IN ONE DAY. ONE. FUCKING. DAY. Are you SERIOUS!?!?!? The author builds up all these characters, including Martha, only to show that Khan is the most shameless bastard on the entire planet? He has s3x with this girl shortly after, even justifying his actions with "Eh, i've changed, Martha will be alright." ????? This is disgustingly unforgiveable. I would've liked Khan's relationship with Liiza, MAYBE, if it was drawn out and developed, and it didn't take 2 DAYS for them to start f3cking. Also, I can't tell if it's a harem, but by c100 I would be suprised if it wasn't. The way MC goes around f3cking girls and kissing them (or letting them kiss him EVEN WHEN he's WITH MARTHA at the time (justifies it with bullshit)) is giving harem vibes. So, for anyone who cares: WARNING: HAREM.
This novel's amazing! I'm suprised that I've decided to give this novel a review, since for the first 25 chapters, I was convinced it was one of the worst novels I've ever read. Yes, it starts off TERRIBLY. But the author improves, and to be honest, it's REALLY good right now. All I ask is, author, PLEASE do not make this a harem. One of my FAVORITE things about this novel is the quippy, light-hearted yet emotional friendship the MC has with his male contemporaries (you know who I'm talking about, plot armor MC lol). It's very wholesome. DON'T make this about catching all the girls as they fawn over him. DON'T justify harems with "eAcH of tHe GiRlS hAvE tHeIR OwN pERsoNalIty!" Please. I love the pacing. If it continues at this pace, it will go on for quite a while, but I don't care. The pacing feels amazing. I got scared when at the end of volume 1 you said "From now on, the pacing will be quicker," because I loved the second half of volume 1. But volume 2 was also great, so props. Good job author!