Old Mansion
ive got nothing to say really... ive read upto chap 35 now... and all i say is... messed up... this is too messed up... ive posted a comment on chap 35 and alll, check it out if ur interested if not then dont... ! its either ive missed something while reading or this is just that messed up and idiotic...[img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap]
I have read the current available chapters (20) and so far I am enjoying the read. Itâs the standard weak to strong trope with a system to aid his development. The system is actually sentient and sounds rather interesting. So far he has a goal, the usual one to be better than everyone else and be recognised, no apparent love interest, though the girl he saved may become one but that is purely speculation at this stage. The idea of the house being his avenue to success is something I havenât read before but it does appeal, especially when he mentions there is over 40 rooms inside so there is a lot of room to grow in this story. Anyways, it is early days and I would recommend this to readers to support and follow.
It's a mess. It's a hodgepodge of ideas from different stories connected through the idea of a house mutating. Or a system connected to a house. By chapter 20 something, it's a system with personality novel and the house is sidelined as a resource. This story doesn't know what it wants to be. At least the basic writing is decent - no bad grammar, half-finished sentences or vocabulary used oddly. It could have been a good story even with the elements from different novels (shadow hack, fishing the myriad heavens, my backyard is a dump..) if the unique aspect, the house, was developed properly. And by that I mean in a consistent way, with house as the focus, and using elements from those stories that fit with the golden finger, that is, the house. But alas, earwax, ahem, no, I mean it's not to be.
Mediocre at best, seems like a newbie writer Short chapters with little or useless information which makes them boring, chapters 26-35 can be shortened and edited to 1 or 2 chapters. Cheat could be explained better and the whole cultivation system is still unclear, until now talents were only people from influencial families that received lots of resources. MC seems gutsy or ignorant, being so weak, but acting all mighty with fmc that is a few major realms higher. Usual face slapping, but done in a poor manner, starting from mc being uderstimated and badmouthed then he does something amazing and everyone is shocked to the core, but still continue to look down on him and hope that he will fail...
Decently written though not without it's flaws. The story is never the less interesting and the story feels rather novel for as much as I've read. (25 chapters) I would recommend this as a book worth taking a look at to see if it may fit your tastes. I have added it to my own library and will read it as I am able.