I'm to lazy to say too words on the rare occasion I reference our planet as a whole I would prefer Gaia, Terra, sol-3. Sol-3 being my favorite as it's the only one that doesn't still mean dirt or some personification of it.

you mean your thoughts arnt in third person. I thought everyone's was.

or anywhere

what does this mean, serial killers are typically pretty average looking. It would make sense if it was said he looked like a gangster or aggressive like resting angry face. Serial killers are so dangerous because they could be anyone.

I In all fareness he had no responsibility to post a detailed response to the question "is it good?" as it is a yes or no question as for his review it was about the synopsis which is a credible review and describing the details of the story is the authors responsibility not his. I can see how your original comment about him being no better than the author could be taken as an offense which would likely get anyone irritated wether you meant to or not. I for one greatly appreciate his review as I too hate stories with poorly written synopsis as it is typically an indicator of writing quality and investment of author and the further comment of it being meh, for me spoke volumes to the story when paired with the initial review. If you felt he didn't write a great review that's fine it isn't as if you can't write your own detailing what you thought more comprehensively but don't get mad because you unjustly agitated someone else and they responded with frustration.

This is really bad.

simp

maybe means yang as it can be both masculinity and sun

they were a race of giants that often played the antagonist to norse gods in mythology. Some of the norse gods like Odin and his kin were decended in part by jotun. They lived in jotunheim which I believe was at the bottom of yagdrassil.

he would have also had to unlock bio field to be able to carry a helicopter in his hands without it breaking because of all the weight in one location

This mc is an idiot. There is no character development just a psychopath mc who does dumb stuff while pretending it's logical. so far all the characters in this novel are poorly written there hasn't been any kind of meaningful development and can be summed up as an infant playing with a new toy but in an annoying not fun way.

this is a bad system mechanic as at some point you wouldn't be able to earn points as either you would change the entire plot or the known plot would end and no more points. it would be better to say more points based on influence on the universe which would mean a similiar thing but have infinite progression.

There is a dagon in marvel he is one of the hyborian gods. there were also a few othe entities known as Dagon one was a fallen angel and another I think was som ancient God of wind.

"shot an"

Best option for metal weapons based on keeping with shamanism would be to make the argument that because they are fantasy creatures, their bones are stronger than traditional earth animal bones so they can be ground into bone powder and mixed with molten iron without being destroyed this would add som carbon to the iron making an interesting bone-steal weapon imbued with the spirit of the bones used.

what? bones don't melt they are an organic compound when heated to high temperatures the organic compound scorches and begins to break down crumbling to dust. They do not become malleable regardless of temperature. Bone breaks down at 800deg.

True, but that logic is a deep dark hole that leads to bad writing. alphas are not real wolf packs are more family units with the parents leading the pack. there are exceptions to this but almost always involve human interference. like being in captivity or the reduction of natural environments that force non family units together.

isn't aether the God if the upper sky who does have connection to light but is more inclined with air

caterpie could be really useful once fully evolved with its powder moves

Hope you havnt stopped the novel it's really good so far closest I have found to the type of novel I been wanting.