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Alanray64

Alanray64

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Avid reader, particular interests in Urban, rebirth/cultivation, critical returns and such novels along the theme of “am I a cultivation big shot”

2018-05-27 JoinedAustralia
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  • Alanray64
    Alanray6417h
    Commented

    Not carving, try craving.

    ' How long has it been! 8 years? 9 years? 10 years? Aaanghhh! I finally received the carving I was waiting for, my empty womanhood is finally getting filled by someone other than my husband. Sob* you bastard! You better regret what you have missed '
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    The Villain wants a sect full of maidens!
    Eastern · Cultured_Daoist69
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  • Alanray64
    Alanray6417h
    Commented

    Gas? Maybe fast ?

    Without any further resort, she began to take my length as gas as she could, from time to time, I could feel she wanted to throw up
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    The Villain wants a sect full of maidens!
    Eastern · Cultured_Daoist69
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  • Alanray64
    Alanray6417h
    Commented

    So the MC has been cucked already 🤦🏻‍♂️. Ominous start.

    Zeng Yang watched the scene with jealousy and hatred. He had already taken possession of Gu Qingya before, and it was this Yiyi who stood in the way. Yet, he wouldn't mind considering Yiyi his daughter—she was indeed cute and sensible. But to Yiyi, he was never in her sight.
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    My Daddy is a Divine Doctor
    Urban · Buckwheat Noodles Lover
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  • Alanray64
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    Commented

    That really doesn’t sound right? Two square metres? So small, maybe 20 or maybe 200 but not two.

    Which meant that his wife's savings of 170,000 could only afford two square meters.
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    Awakening the Daily Intelligence System
    Urban · Dark eye mask
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  • Alanray64
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    Replied to GameMage

    Yeh now that I read it once more, I reckon you are right. 👍

    Lowering his eyes was out of fear that Mother Ye might see the tears swirling in his eyes.
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    Recently Dumped by Gold-Digger, Goddess Asked Me to Sign a Birth Consent Form
    Urban · Silly Little Bok Choy
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  • Alanray64
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    Commented

    Why is this sentence and the one above seem like he same thing? Is it a rewrite?

    Turning to Lara, he asked, "I appreciate the tour. Can you tell me how much the cashout would be if I decide to rent this place?"
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    Building a Business Empire with my Technological System
    Sci-fi · Faux1231
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  • Alanray64
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    Commented

    Just saying, stop using uttered all the time. It feels and sounds wrong. Plenty of other descriptive words to use out there.

    Ch 11 Another Face Slap.
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    I Rose From Rags To Riches After Receiving The Wealth System
    Fantasy · Jeffson
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  • Alanray64
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    Commented

    …these words were flowing…

    Yes, these utterances were flowing out of their mouths, they were more brutal here than the first supermarket I entered.
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    I Rose From Rags To Riches After Receiving The Wealth System
    Fantasy · Jeffson
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  • Alanray64
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    Commented

    I wouldnt use uttered so much. She spoke, she replied , she apologised etc

    "We are sorry for the harassment, we misjudged you". One of the ladies uttered.
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    I Rose From Rags To Riches After Receiving The Wealth System
    Fantasy · Jeffson
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  • Alanray64
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    Commented

    …I muttered to myself..

    And I uttered to myself, "I'm not crazy, I'm just trying to accomplish a quest".
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    I Rose From Rags To Riches After Receiving The Wealth System
    Fantasy · Jeffson
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  • Alanray64
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    Commented

    Soft drink for breakfast ? I don’t know why but that feels so wrong.. coffee, tea, milk or even juice. I guess that’s how I was brought up 😂

    And with that, she walked out of my room, and I didn't waste time to begin digging in. The food was just as delicious as yesterday's own. I ate and ate until I'd emptied the plate, then I began drinking the soft drink.
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    I Rose From Rags To Riches After Receiving The Wealth System
    Fantasy · Jeffson
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  • Alanray64
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    Commented

    So yeh, he happens to have access to this? Can quite easily pick it up (even with gloves) and just casually throw it. Kinda really far fetched as the country heavily controls such radioactive isotopes.

    "Scared? Is this thing called a radiation ball? Is its main content cobalt-60? Did you use it to harm Mo Mo?" The more Yang Xiao spoke, the stronger the rage in his heart became, until a murderous aura filled the air.
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    House-daddy vs Domineering CEO Mommy
    Urban · Nine-folds Machine Man
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  • Alanray64
    Alanray643d
    Replied to SovereignOfDarc

    I wondered also, I did have a bit of a look but I didn’t find anything. Guessing it is out on their nations book site as the author asks for support. Still if the actual name can be found then it would be good 👍

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    Recently Dumped by Gold-Digger, Goddess Asked Me to Sign a Birth Consent Form
    Urban · Silly Little Bok Choy
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  • Alanray64
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    Commented

    Hmm it was just mention e he transferred 500 thousand, those banks are skimming again.

    Fifty thousand, it was really fifty thousand.
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    Recently Dumped by Gold-Digger, Goddess Asked Me to Sign a Birth Consent Form
    Urban · Silly Little Bok Choy
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  • Alanray64
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    Commented

    Somehow I think the name just changed in Less than a few sentences

    "Master, do not worry, I will exert all my effort!" assured Kong Ming.
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    Recently Dumped by Gold-Digger, Goddess Asked Me to Sign a Birth Consent Form
    Urban · Silly Little Bok Choy
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  • Alanray64
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    Commented

    Lsp?

    This guy, he really is lsp.
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    Recently Dumped by Gold-Digger, Goddess Asked Me to Sign a Birth Consent Form
    Urban · Silly Little Bok Choy
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  • Alanray64
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    Commented

    Why is the author referenced here? Mistake maybe?

    At this time, Bai Cai had gone off to make formula.
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    Recently Dumped by Gold-Digger, Goddess Asked Me to Sign a Birth Consent Form
    Urban · Silly Little Bok Choy
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  • Alanray64
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    Commented

    Doesn’t make sense this sentence? 4th looked at 4th? Which is herself?

    She seemed to wonder why chubby little Fourth looked different from them.
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    Recently Dumped by Gold-Digger, Goddess Asked Me to Sign a Birth Consent Form
    Urban · Silly Little Bok Choy
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  • Alanray64
    Alanray643d
    Commented

    …we have children and their mother at home Would sound better.

    "Hmm, we have a baby and a pregnant woman at home, so we need to make some changes in certain areas. Of course, the small parts, the larger areas don't need as much. Let's walk and see," Ye Fan said.
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    Recently Dumped by Gold-Digger, Goddess Asked Me to Sign a Birth Consent Form
    Urban · Silly Little Bok Choy
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  • Alanray64
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    Commented

    …check on the children.

    Moved, Bai Susu watched Ye Fan and then went into the room to check on the child.
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    Recently Dumped by Gold-Digger, Goddess Asked Me to Sign a Birth Consent Form
    Urban · Silly Little Bok Choy
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