Alanray64
Avid reader, particular interests in Urban, rebirth/cultivation, critical returns and such novels along the theme of “am I a cultivation big shot”
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Gas? Maybe fast ?
So the MC has been cucked already 🤦🏻♂️. Ominous start.
That really doesn’t sound right? Two square metres? So small, maybe 20 or maybe 200 but not two.
Yeh now that I read it once more, I reckon you are right. 👍
Why is this sentence and the one above seem like he same thing? Is it a rewrite?
…these words were flowing…
I wouldnt use uttered so much. She spoke, she replied , she apologised etc
…I muttered to myself..
Soft drink for breakfast ? I don’t know why but that feels so wrong.. coffee, tea, milk or even juice. I guess that’s how I was brought up 😂
So yeh, he happens to have access to this? Can quite easily pick it up (even with gloves) and just casually throw it. Kinda really far fetched as the country heavily controls such radioactive isotopes.
I wondered also, I did have a bit of a look but I didn’t find anything. Guessing it is out on their nations book site as the author asks for support. Still if the actual name can be found then it would be good 👍
Hmm it was just mention e he transferred 500 thousand, those banks are skimming again.
Somehow I think the name just changed in Less than a few sentences
Lsp?
Why is the author referenced here? Mistake maybe?
Doesn’t make sense this sentence? 4th looked at 4th? Which is herself?
…we have children and their mother at home Would sound better.
…check on the children.