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Otacon88

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  • Otacon88
    Otacon881h
    Commented
    Nevertheless, the owner who has an appearance of a man in his 30s smiled and said, "Please wait, I shall let you taste my secret delicious sauce."
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    The Unlimited Money System
    Urban · Me_DaVillain
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  • Otacon88
    Otacon882h
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    A long straight orange hair, it was smooth, but she still has a mature beautiful face.
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    The Unlimited Money System
    Urban · Me_DaVillain
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  • Otacon88
    Otacon882h
    Commented

    So famous is it? Famously famous?

    He was going to the famous Centro, where he can buy famous branded items.
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    The Unlimited Money System
    Urban · Me_DaVillain
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  • Otacon88
    Otacon882h
    Commented

    My god a sentient education institution?!!?!?!?

    "What! It was the year 2020 If I remember I was still a college this time!"
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    The Unlimited Money System
    Urban · Me_DaVillain
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  • Otacon88
    Otacon883h
    Commented

    Is he a bull fighter?

    Gold leaf print dinner jacket. "Pierre Gartin."
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    The Tycoon Inheritance
    Fantasy · Devoted_laurel
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  • Otacon88
    Otacon8812d
    Replied to King4ever

    He just won’t do it very often..

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    Path to Dual Cultivation
    Eastern · MyLittleBrother
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  • Otacon88
    Otacon8820d
    Commented

    Could it be

    One of Exedra's favorite super heroes from earth used chains as a weapon, so that factored into his decision quite a bit.
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    First Demonic Dragon
    Fantasy · AnathaShesha
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  • Otacon88
    Otacon8824d
    Replied to Saad_Yousuf

    Tbh I can’t completely disagree… it’s def not good.. in fact I’d say it’s pretty terrible .. but by the standards of webnovel its not that odious.. for one the translation is legible.. nowhere close to perfect but acceptable.. the plot is incredibly dumb but fairly entertaining in face slapping wish fulfilment way… Honestly just the fact that they don’t change the names to western names while keeping everything else obviously Chinese is already a step up.. or that although its similar to like 300 other novels they didn’t directly word for word lift the plot from another another novel 300 chapters in.. It could be MUCH worst

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    Found 100 Million In My Rented Apartment
    Urban · Supreme Yi Fan
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  • Otacon88
    Otacon8824d
    Replied to Victor_Weismann

    I love this novel… I really only have one criticism.. do you know how ridiculous stupidly large breasts actually look? I mean breasts are nice but I-cup breasts? Seriously? Are they all fucking lolo Ferrari? What’s the point? Big boobs cool.. but this is ridiculous

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    My Three Wives Are Beautiful Vampires.
    Fantasy · Victor_Weismann
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  • Otacon88
    Otacon8825d
    Commented

    Armoury not weaponry

    The weaponry was located west of the library, before long, Grey got to a one-story building. There was an instructor at the door of the building who first confirms the identity and Plane of a student before they are allowed entry into the building.
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    Affinity:Chaos
    Fantasy · Springs_Halo
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  • Otacon88
    Otacon8825d
    Commented

    Tenses are important

    It's been a week since Grey started trying to comprehend the Lightning element, and so far, well, he hasn't made any progress yet. But he didn't feel down though. Every day, he tries harder than the previous day.
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    Affinity:Chaos
    Fantasy · Springs_Halo
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  • Otacon88
    Otacon8825d
    Replied to Vaiz_

    Yes one must keep abreast of such mistakes…

    "Yes mom, I know what to do" Grey already planned this. He will work hard to improve his talent before the teat, then shock the entire city with his results.
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    Affinity:Chaos
    Fantasy · Springs_Halo
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  • Otacon88
    Otacon8826d
    Replied to Saad_Yousuf

    Then your life will continue to be unfulfilled…

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    Found 100 Million In My Rented Apartment
    Urban · Supreme Yi Fan
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  • Otacon88
    Otacon8826d
    Commented

    Stealing from others again…

    "Is this the Ancestral transformation of the noble vampires?" Sam's eyes lit up in excitement. He could feel Amelia's presence had changed; she had grown stronger.
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    The Inheritance Of The Supreme Immortals
    Fantasy · Sam_OverPowered
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  • Otacon88
    Otacon8826d
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    I enjoyed this because I like the OP codex gimmick and the powers he gets are cool… but there’s some very obvious plagiarism.. it’s trying super hard to be ‘my three vampire wives’ and one of his powers is pretty much lifted from ‘solo leveling’… this wouldn’t be so bad except the author is not as good as those authors so the attempts at humour come out a bit shit.. also going straight to wanting to fuck his mom is weird…

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    The Inheritance Of The Supreme Immortals
    Fantasy · Sam_OverPowered
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  • Otacon88
    Otacon8826d
    Commented

    The head is the only body part that can be decapitated… because it means to remove the head…. So why mention the head at all?

    With their strength, the hero's party defeated the demon lord, with Hikari ending Aygibhed's reign by decapitating his head.
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    Zero: From Hero's Sidekick To The World's Strongest
    Fantasy · Aniki_
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  • Otacon88
    Otacon8826d
    Commented

    Rogue not rouge Rouge is just French for red…. Also a type of makeup..

    This paragraph has been deleted.
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    Zero: From Hero's Sidekick To The World's Strongest
    Fantasy · Aniki_
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  • Otacon88
    Otacon8830d
    Replied to Azaroth_

    He probably will though…

    Ch 5 Mission Hall
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    Dual Cultivation God Returns
    Eastern · DaoistGreenOnion
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  • Otacon88
    Otacon8830d
    Commented

    It’s a good thing she had two breasts and both of them are huge… wouldn’t it be awkward if she only had one? Or one was bigger than the other?

    Inside the dimly lit room, a young woman with long light-blue hair, a curvaceous body with two huge breasts wearing a deep blue robe was standing near a bed while a man was tied to the bed completely naked
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    Dual Cultivator with a cultivation system
    Eastern · Bloodsniper
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  • Otacon88
    Otacon8830d
    Commented

    You can only kneel down on your knees so what’s the point in adding knees?

    Nadia slowly knelt down to her knees, holding his shaft close to her face and taking a whiff of his muscular beast as she reached out for his length while giving him a lustful look.
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    Eternal Temptation: Awakening Sinful Desires
    Eastern · Slow_down
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