Mithren
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Mithren25dCommentedMake sure you don't get robbed.
Lin Mo said with a smile, "Silly wife, there's nothing to panic about. We just need to find a buyer nearby Rakshasa City, talk about the price, and sell the Guangxu Yuanbao to them today!"- Mithren25dCommented
So it can fall out and get lost during the night?
"You can't keep it there; give it to me, I'll put it in the pocket of my pajamas." - Mithren26dCommented
Honestly I'd just cut through the wall and connect to the neighboring apartment.
Wang Tao was reluctant to throw away those supplies that were temporarily unnecessary so moving to a bigger house was the best choice.detailApocalypse: I Can See the HP Bar, Killing Monsters Drops LootSci-fi · Mountain Ghost Holds the Pen - Mithren26dCommented
My memory must be bad. I don't remember any scavenger.
Based on the current situation, there seemed to be only four surviving families: 501, which was his own; 502, where the sister-in-law lived; the stranger in 401, and the bald man in 202.detailApocalypse: I Can See the HP Bar, Killing Monsters Drops LootSci-fi · Mountain Ghost Holds the Pen - Mithren26dCommented
I'm suddenly suspecting he's talking about a serial killer
"...Yes. But most likely it's just him, because he doesn't bring women home very often, maybe once a month..."detailApocalypse: I Can See the HP Bar, Killing Monsters Drops LootSci-fi · Mountain Ghost Holds the Pen - Mithren26dCommented
Find some rope. Get up where they can't reach. Tie a big slip knot. Pull them up and drop them. Repeat till they're dead.
If only he could lead them to a certain place and take them down one by one...detailApocalypse: I Can See the HP Bar, Killing Monsters Drops LootSci-fi · Mountain Ghost Holds the Pen - Mithren26dCommented
Manipulative? I was starting to feel better about her but this makes me suspicious.
At the heartbreakingly sad part, Ding Yuqin covered her face and wept profusely. Then through the gaps in her fingers, she stealthily glanced at Wang Tao, hoping to gain his sympathy.detailApocalypse: I Can See the HP Bar, Killing Monsters Drops LootSci-fi · Mountain Ghost Holds the Pen - Mithren26dCommented
I'm starting to not like her. She's portrayed as helples and now it feels like she's trying to leach off him. I hope the author gives her some redeeming qualities soon or kills her off.
"Cough... that Wang Tao, you're amazing! Getting so many supplies today! I see you're having a bit of trouble carrying them... Let sister-in-law help you..."detailApocalypse: I Can See the HP Bar, Killing Monsters Drops LootSci-fi · Mountain Ghost Holds the Pen - Mithren26dCommented
I'd have taken even the almost empty one. Every little bit can help. Use the most empty first and make supplies last.
The gas cylinder in apartment 602 was nearly empty, so Wang Tao didn't bother with it. But the one in apartment 301 was almost full, so he could take it back home as well.detailApocalypse: I Can See the HP Bar, Killing Monsters Drops LootSci-fi · Mountain Ghost Holds the Pen - Mithren26dReplied to DaoistwcBFTE
I think he'd need the hammer to have a longer handle before he'd use it.
But to achieve a one-hit kill, weapons were vital. His kitchen knife had been rendered useless after a single use—he needed to find a weapon that would last longer.detailApocalypse: I Can See the HP Bar, Killing Monsters Drops LootSci-fi · Mountain Ghost Holds the Pen - Mithren1mthCommented
Does this mean days here are only 12 hours long?
Indeed, that's cultivating for one full day—twelve hours!detailClan Cultivation: Starting from Beast TamingEastern · Purple Violet Emperor Of The Middle Heaven - Mithren1mthCommented
Mana is typically magic based. Spiritual energy is more typical of cultivation novels
After getting the basic situation straight, using the memories and the muscle memory of his body, Zhou Chun quickly entered a meditative state to begin recovering his Mana.detailClan Cultivation: Starting from Beast TamingEastern · Purple Violet Emperor Of The Middle Heaven - Mithren1mthReplied to Grayback
With an attitude like that nobody will want to give you constructive criticism let alone meaningful feedback. If you feel like the feedback doesn't fit you can choose to not respond or to act like an adult rather than like an immature child.
A high-level comprehensive Tantra AKA cultivation technique, would have its own sets of Yantra, Mantra, Mudra, Asana, and Prana. These sets would vary after each layer or chapter mentioned in the Tantra. - Mithren1mthCommented
He didn't know anything but now 'recalls' news reports?
Immediately, seeing this scene, Kyle recalled the news reports on tv that he had seen so far. He knew it was too late for her. He stepped back and covered his mouth with his hand as tears blurred his vision. - Mithren1mthPosted
Very nitpicky review here. Lots of little mistakes that a good editor would catch. Too many cliche bits. I didn't get very far before deciding to drop. Continued reading may well show story worth reading but this start... I admit this review is harsh and nitpicky but as I'm dropping the story over these points I belive it worth sharing my view.
- Mithren1mthCommented
Yuck. Another narcissistic MC
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No more mouth. He dubbed it away
A boy about 11 or 12 years old opened his eyes, patting the table in front of him, shaking his head groggily, and sat up on the chair. He rubbed away his mouth with a confused expression that shrouded his face. - Mithren1mthCommented
I mean seniority wise he's below
"Teacher Gale, Boss Zhang, then there's you, Ajax. Well, there's Big Sis Sera, but she's in a coma, so it doesn't count. As for the bunnies… Teacher, is he above or below the bunnies?" - Mithren1mthCommented
With how much he accomplished in just a few hours... he should scared
"Few hours? Anyway, we got LOTS of stuff to do!"