new author here... what do u think? was it a bit too fast?? for me it is...

could be seen walking then, huh...? pfft- seems like I need to pay more attention to these small details that might or might not affect the chap...

fate*

hehe, i actually have a total 121 views now... so happy[img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update]

Strange... why is the space between phrase of paragraph so small??... on my draft, the space between the paragraph were as wide as 1-2 inch of a ruler! was it usually like this or not? oh btw, 3rd chap will be posted tomorrow!

Hahahaha idk if its bcuz this is my book, but... i did enjoy readind this chap... to my lovely 1st/2nd,etc reader, did u enjoy it? u can criticize my work too as i am just a new author and need views on my book so i could improve it!😢😆

A/N 😅😅

Shameless Author here! Imma rate this one a full 5 Star😙! New Author here! This is my first book, and to be honest im completely nervous right now! Geez... if I have any mistakes- e,g: - spellings, - grammars, - names, -or even the plot itself😅😅 -etc. Please do remind me throung the comment section, or here in reviews section(and gave me a review btw)😢😢 ....... Thats all for now! gonna edit the 2nd chap for a bit!👌 ........ Oh! and please do support me! thanks everyone!😙😙

really? dont mind trying it out then...

is this novel good? i had seen this novel a while back, read the sypnosis but, i havent decided yet whether to read it or not so i havent put it on my library yet.., considering u just said 'latter' it seems like u have read quite a lot so, was it good?

if im not wrong... true dragons = pure blood dragons,no? ... and his full strength that couldnt even be compared to peak leaders, and we're talking his full strength at that... and now his physical strength alone are comperable to true dragons now...? are dragons so weak now?... what exaggeration...

a simp eh... boring... im out of here...

its been a while... mind anyone telling me the realms? im too lazy to be bothered to read back all the previous chaps...

i only read this because the mutated mansion thing is rather new to me... in the end i have not even read all the trial chaps and im disappointed already...

ive got nothing to say really... ive read upto chap 35 now... and all i say is... messed up... this is too messed up... ive posted a comment on chap 35 and alll, check it out if ur interested if not then dont... ! its either ive missed something while reading or this is just that messed up and idiotic...[img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap]

this is getting boring to be honest... lingyun or spirituel essence, what is it really? and the strength division... its too messed up... theres a stage and stars... so basically the mc is only on 1st stage 1 or 2 stars after all those things he got(and he needs about 9900 points so reach 9 stars)... and the ye woman is suppostedly on the 3rd stage unnkown star/s... just the difference in strength confuse me... the ye woman is more like the mc than the mc are... or am i missing something? and whats up with the bystanders... all of them basically have 5 points or more in each and every single one of their stats... and spirit is supposedly equivalent to their mind or brain strength... then despite that they are still idiotic licking dogs... maybe im putting in too much of my views here but...this just too idiotic...ugh... u know what? forget it...lets just read it upto 40 chaps and be done with it...

AHAHAHAHHAAHHAHAHAHA! This chapter is so wholesome!

HAHAHAHAHAHAHA this father and son duo...

i seemed to have read the wn of this before but i forgot the title... mind anyone telling me?[img=fp][img=fp][img=fp][img=fp][img=fp][img=fp][img=fp]

hahaha... somehow this just made me laugh