funkiller_562
I just read the first chapter so sorry if something not match up with the story'. The premise is good, there is no plot yet at chapter 1 so I Will not comment it, but the info dump is too much. I like it become more mistery and the power of the male MC will be told on later story'. Because this novel is category female lead I think for first chapter is good to talk about the female MC first, because the male MC need to have some superpower or op so it Will become the umbrella for the development of female mc.. but maybe I'm wrong i don't know because I only read first chapter.
To be completely honest, I think this book is a great read. The characters feel real and the plot makes me want to read more chapters than I can get. Though there were a couple of quality mistakes in the earlier chapters, I still found the story to be followable. The novel is currently complete so there's no need to wait on new chapters, and the world and character backgrounds are unique despite overused tropes nowadays. Overall this is a pretty great book and I'd definitely recommend it to those who love Fantasy and Romance.
I'm not much of a guru when it comes to romance but the characters are slowly but surely making an impression. I'm also not that knowledgeable about the aristocratic parts of the story but I've read a ton and know it is perfectly executed. All in all the story is great, It's clean, and most importantly the characters are lovable
I have to say the POV switching was such an original idea that I haven't seen in a lot of stories and to make those different characters meet, it was really exciting. The story has weird powers, eyes colours changing, a completely fantasy or magical yet scientific world background. It's definitely an interesting read no doubt about that. And no grammatical errors to notice either. Not bad at all.
'll say after reading this story, will be on my good she t list, the writing itself was great although the dialogue is sometimes confusing, but the character do the heavy lifting from their design and interaction, the world building is one thing a mystery still don't know what comes after next, I'll be sure to read this from time to time. Overall try making the dialogue clear and easy to read next time, kudos for the aurthor