Review Detail of Firelorn_P_King in My boyfriend can control the darkness

I have to say the POV switching was such an original idea that I haven't seen in a lot of stories and to make those different characters meet, it was really exciting. The story has weird powers, eyes colours changing, a completely fantasy or magical yet scientific world background. It's definitely an interesting read no doubt about that. And no grammatical errors to notice either. Not bad at all.