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Firelorn_P_King

Firelorn_P_King

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Just an introverted writeršŸ–¤

2021-10-16 JoinedNigeria
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  • Firelorn_P_King
    Firelorn_P_King1yr
    Posted

    Assassin's, brokers, wisps and the best part, magic. The story encompasses a lot of things in fantasy. The plot is straight forward and the grammar is great, very understandable. If I was to complain I would say the first few were a bit slow but it gets better real quick. As a story with a lot to say about the main character and the adventure they go through, it's an interesting read.

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    Legendary Assassin's Saga: Reincarnated into Wastrel
    Fantasy Ā· empressblackrose09
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  • Firelorn_P_King
    Firelorn_P_King1yr
    Replied to Jo_J

    Thanks and Happy New year to you too

    altalt
    Light And Shadow (CHIAROSCURO)
    Fantasy Ā· Prince Firelorn
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  • Firelorn_P_King
    Firelorn_P_King1yr
    Posted

    Fascinating, the experience these characters go through in the name of discovery of that one emotion, love. I like the struggle between love and lust that the characters went through, it made it interesting. Well written with good grammar as well. In a way, it feels like an intriguing romance story where the characters journey through their lives to find true love. It's a good read.

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    Unrefusable offer
    Urban Ā· Juliett_Juliett
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  • Firelorn_P_King
    Firelorn_P_King1yr
    Commented

    Fascinating...

    'Love' became a mere word in her terminology. Just a mere neurobiological process that involves twelve areas of the brain, which activates to release euphoric neurotransmitters like dopamine, oxytocin, adrenaline and vasopressin. At the same time, sophisticated cognitive functions related to the creation of mental representations, metaphors and body image change; in short, it was all trickeries of the mind.
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    Unrefusable offer
    Urban Ā· Juliett_Juliett
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  • Firelorn_P_King
    Firelorn_P_King1yr
    Posted

    The story is well thought out and the grammar is clean, neat and well written. I also enjoyed the plot of the story as well, very smooth and understandable. I know it starts a bit grey due to the MC's past but reading through the thoughts of the mc, Bryan, it's a bit funny too. Just from reading a few chapters I was able to visualize what was happening like a movie. I enjoyed the immersive nature of the story. And the situations made sense, heck, I would say they were kind of realistic. A very good story with a lot of potential overall.

    altalt
    The Deceitful One
    Fantasy Ā· PandaDumpling
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  • Firelorn_P_King
    Firelorn_P_King1yr
    Commented

    See this! I just gifted the story: Inspiration capsule

    Ch 1 Prologue - Hello World
    altalt
    I'd Like to Change My Reincarnation Subscription, Please
    Sci-fi Ā· Geminel
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  • Firelorn_P_King
    Firelorn_P_King1yr
    Commented

    See this! I just gifted the story: Pizza

    Ch 10 Chapter 10; Watching strange video clips....
    altalt
    Transmigrated Old fox is Master Shen Wei 's wife
    Fantasy Ā· Fridah
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  • Firelorn_P_King
    Firelorn_P_King1yr
    Posted

    I've taken a good while of my time to read this novel, and let me just say... This is not a story, it's a masterpiece, it's a movie, and a good one at that. Need I say more.

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    I'd Like to Change My Reincarnation Subscription, Please
    Sci-fi Ā· Geminel
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  • Firelorn_P_King
    Firelorn_P_King1yr
    Posted

    I've got to say, for a fantasy novel it's got a lot of action, adventure and surprisingly drama. I read the first chapter, before you know it, I was on the fourth one. It's really driven and energetic especially in the dialogues of the main character. It was just so much to read in one sitting but not so much to overwhelm you. All in all, I enjoyed it.

    altalt
    Sovereign Of Wrath: Rise Of The Demonic God
    Fantasy Ā· WriterTheos
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  • Firelorn_P_King
    Firelorn_P_King1yr
    Posted

    It's an acquired taste. The beginning was a bit weird and surprising, but it was definitely intriguing. From the 'culture' writing, you can see that the author is definitely a man of culture. Thus, it's definitely an exciting read for my fellow men of culture out there. The grammar is quite alright as well as the intricate descriptions of the characters. I also like how unique the plot of the story is, especially with its utilization of the 'enhancers' in such a power driven world background. It's an exciting read indeed, especially after the first few chapters. That's when the 'climax' takes effect.

    altalt
    Harem Overlord: I ALWAYS Finish Quick!
    Fantasy Ā· 2Big2FitIn
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  • Firelorn_P_King
    Firelorn_P_King1yr
    Replied to Phantomfiend

    Much obliged

    altalt
    Light And Shadow (CHIAROSCURO)
    Fantasy Ā· Prince Firelorn
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  • Firelorn_P_King
    Firelorn_P_King1yr
    Posted

    This novel feels to me like a well thought out masterpiece. The immediate entry drew me in, war, spirits, even time altering events. It's not your usual clichƩ start and it only gets better from there. I liked the detailed expression of the characters, it felt like there was a lot of character development between the characters and their backgrounds. The grammar is also on point. I expected some errors on the first chapter but there weren't any to my knowledge and even further in the story. I enjoyed the read, and I expect others to do the same.

    altalt
    Omni War: Rebirth Of The Supreme Knight
    Fantasy Ā· Phantomfiend
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  • Firelorn_P_King
    Firelorn_P_King1yr
    Replied to Aj_Friday

    it's a type of red colour

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    altalt
    Light And Shadow (CHIAROSCURO)
    Fantasy Ā· Prince Firelorn
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  • Firelorn_P_King
    Firelorn_P_King1yr
    Replied to Aj_Friday
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    Light And Shadow (CHIAROSCURO)
    Fantasy Ā· Prince Firelorn
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  • Firelorn_P_King
    Firelorn_P_King1yr
    Posted

    I didn't go too far into the story and I was already drawn in by this complex yet understandable mix of fantasy, mystery, and thriller. The descriptive background of the story placed me on the edge of my seat. I especially enjoyed the dynamic duo of the two vampires, no spoilers. The story gives me certain modern vampire movie vibes but definitely holds true to its uniqueness. And you can tell that time was well spent in writing this story, a lot of time. There's just so much to unpack from this plot that it kinda keeps me well engaged to the story. Keep it up author.

    altalt
    Mystic Dark
    Fantasy Ā· Evil_DarkKarma
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  • Firelorn_P_King
    Firelorn_P_King1yr
    Commented

    Vampires, huh... I didn't see that coming

    I mean I get it. In the world we exist in, life can be cruel. Very cruel. We of all people should know. Jason and I were both vampire's after all.
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    Mystic Dark
    Fantasy Ā· Evil_DarkKarma
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  • Firelorn_P_King
    Firelorn_P_King1yr
    Commented

    Knew it

    I originally thought that he liked me, but the longer I was around him I noticed that was not the case. He's just super anti-social. A complete recluse. Iā€™m guessing with all of the years of walking the realms of our worlds, the concept of talking to others was something that just didnā€™t seem necessary.
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    Mystic Dark
    Fantasy Ā· Evil_DarkKarma
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  • Firelorn_P_King
    Firelorn_P_King1yr
    Commented

    Must be an introvert

    Of course, this was nothing new. Jason Liverblood was known to be a very quiet man who was usually seen to himself....well except around people he trust like me or his advisors. Every now and again he would burst out into a random conversation, but only when either I or they seemed to be around.
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    Mystic Dark
    Fantasy Ā· Evil_DarkKarma
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  • Firelorn_P_King
    Firelorn_P_King1yr
    Commented

    Some have quoted that man is actually worse than a demon

    ā€œThe only true monster Iā€™ve ever encountered in lifeā€¦...is sadly the monster called mankind.ā€- Bad_Karma
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    Mystic Dark
    Fantasy Ā· Evil_DarkKarma
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  • Firelorn_P_King
    Firelorn_P_King1yr
    Commented

    11 years...! That's a long time

    Hello dear Reader! First of all I would like to thank you for taking the time out to read my novel! If you plan to stay along for the ride, I promise you I will not disappoint. I am here to tell a story that Iā€™ve been planning for 11 years now and am still in the process of writing.
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    Mystic Dark
    Fantasy Ā· Evil_DarkKarma
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