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Shafeereaves

Shafeereaves

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Growing story writer that will reach the top. Friendly person that will always answer or reply to you. Uploads will be 3 chapters a week.

2022-06-25 JoinedUnited States
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Writing

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  • Shafeereaves
    Shafeereaves1yr
    Replied to funkiller_562

    Thank you with your kind words of encouragement

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    Werewolf Haven
    Sci-fi · Shafeereaves
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  • Shafeereaves
    Shafeereaves1yr
    Posted

    I‘m giving you 5 because you got me hooked. I’m gonna continue to read and finish the story you wrote. This is very good from the very beginning to the end.

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    My boyfriend can control the darkness
    Fantasy · funkiller_562
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  • Shafeereaves
    Shafeereaves1yr
    Commented

    Love at first sight

    Slowly, his head turned towards my direction, our eyes meeting immediately. Like feathers, the red rose petals on my hairband scattered and slowly migrated to the floor.
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    My boyfriend can control the darkness
    Fantasy · funkiller_562
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  • Shafeereaves
    Shafeereaves1yr
    Commented

    Cousin is gonna be like his best friend I can see it now

    "That's messed up, but hey you're a goody two shoes so I'm sure you're fine with your life right now."
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    My boyfriend can control the darkness
    Fantasy · funkiller_562
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  • Shafeereaves
    Shafeereaves1yr
    Commented

    The powers of death nice

    My voice faltered when I met his face tightened in anger. I dashed outside, bolting passed the huge doors. It happened again? But I thought it only took anger to hurt someone, even when I'm nervous too. Am I even qualified to live as a normal kid?
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    My boyfriend can control the darkness
    Fantasy · funkiller_562
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  • Shafeereaves
    Shafeereaves1yr
    Commented

    Nervous good sign that he’ll be a kind mc

    No... I c-can do better g-give me another chance. S-stop looking at me like that... I'm...
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    My boyfriend can control the darkness
    Fantasy · funkiller_562
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  • Shafeereaves
    Shafeereaves1yr
    Commented

    Sound too good to be true

    I didn't expect what he did next at all. He walked up to me and took a curt bow. I know this is what they're supposed to do but it still felt wrong to me that someone who's about five times my age would dip their head low to acknowledge my presence. Make that approximately fifty to thirty times my age, that is, if he's an immortal.
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    My boyfriend can control the darkness
    Fantasy · funkiller_562
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  • Shafeereaves
    Shafeereaves1yr
    Commented

    Someone’s antisocial

    "So this is the long-rumoured Crown prince. He appears at debutante balls but never bothers to introduce himself."
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    My boyfriend can control the darkness
    Fantasy · funkiller_562
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  • Shafeereaves
    Shafeereaves1yr
    Commented

    Violet eyes they probably look rare

    Chapter 1. Violet eyes
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    My boyfriend can control the darkness
    Fantasy · funkiller_562
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  • Shafeereaves
    Shafeereaves1yr
    Posted

    I like the story overall. It has great potential to become an anime or show. Keep up the good work because this story got me really interested in it.

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    Ascension of the Monster Queen
    Fantasy · Darkswan
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  • Shafeereaves
    Shafeereaves1yr
    Replied to Mary_Onaduja

    Thank you for your feedback I will keep it in mind. I appreciate your support.

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    Quad Brid
    Sci-fi · Shafeereaves
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  • Shafeereaves
    Shafeereaves1yr
    Replied to Mary_Onaduja

    Thank you

    Ch 2 Kohlson Academy
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    Quad Brid
    Sci-fi · Shafeereaves
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  • Shafeereaves
    Shafeereaves1yr
    Posted

    Kyle went from a nice polite person to a cold badass one I just wanna know if he’s going to die at the end because the Quadbrid he has to fight has no weaknesses

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    Quad Brid
    Sci-fi · Shafeereaves
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  • Shafeereaves
    Shafeereaves1yr
    Posted

    This is Interesting at first I couldn’t tell who the main character was but now I think I know. Keep up the good work, your story is really good.

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    Falling In a Never-ending Dream
    History · _Nightin_gale_
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  • Shafeereaves
    Shafeereaves1yr
    Posted

    Good job on your story overall. I like the pacing and the back and forth point of view for both sisters. Keep up the good work because this could be turned into a movie or show.

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    The enchanted gem
    Teen · Mary_Onaduja
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  • Shafeereaves
    Shafeereaves1yr
    Commented

    Just like anyone else would he accepted it like a true person in debt

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  • Shafeereaves
    Shafeereaves1yr
    Commented

    Wow

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  • Shafeereaves
    Shafeereaves1yr
    Commented

    Wow a attempt to save her best friend failed

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  • Shafeereaves
    Shafeereaves1yr
    Commented

    This was deadly he even tried to say the devil did it.

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  • Shafeereaves
    Shafeereaves1yr
    Posted

    The story is overall good and the build up is nice. Maybe try building into the next chapter because it could leave people confused. Other than that you have some typos but your story is good.

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    The Vengeful Cosa Nostra
    Fantasy · Scorpious_star
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