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DemonicGodJAMN1mthCommentedWhere you hidin crawlah boi
11:58 PM- DemonicGodJAMN8mthCommented
Sir, it has been 2 months since your last release! Where ya at???
Bang! - DemonicGodJAMN11mthReplied to Uncle_jeffs_tales
I protec the author at all costs
Now don't get me wrong. Although I did vote in favor of him not winning the prize, there were ten other editors besides me. - DemonicGodJAMN11mthPosted
Alright first things first, this novel has a decent story to start off with, even though the story starts off very mellow. The novel has decent writing quality but still has some grammar and punctuation issues that can easily be fixed. The characters don't seem forced into the story like how many novels will try to do, and the world background is explained slowly much to my liking. The story hasn't been updated in a few days as of writing this but the author seems to have a consistent upload schedule otherwise. Overall, a great read!
- DemonicGodJAMN1yrCommented
AM is unnecessary here
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The author does a really good job with this novel. The introduction to the main character is phenomenal and keeps the reader on their toes. The plot is diverse and easy to understand, the characters feel like they’re actual humans in each senario, the writing quality and attention to detail is superb and keeps the readers intrigued when delving into the more lore filled areas of the novel. Overall, this book is definitely worth reading, even if you’re new to the genre!
- DemonicGodJAMN1yrCommented
Thats a bold way to start 👀
Namgung Eun-Ju was going to die. - DemonicGodJAMN1yrPosted
Let's take this from the top, the story of this novel is decently thought out. It follows it's trope well and keeps the clichés to a minimum. However, the writing quality isn't the best. The author uses "And" , "Then" , "So" particularly too much, alongside the mc's name. Although the writing quality can be improved upon greatly, the story is still quite readable and I definitely recommend it to avid fantasy enjoyers.
- DemonicGodJAMN1yrCommented
Oi where you at?
Now don't get me wrong. Although I did vote in favor of him not winning the prize, there were ten other editors besides me. - DemonicGodJAMN1yrPosted
MC is interesting and show potential, unlike many others. This already means character development is in progress… The story background is shown smoothly, and nothing unnecessary is mentioned. So, all good. I‘m not going to talk about the story because it'd be better for you to find out on your own how good it is. Overall, it’s a great read. Give it a try.
- DemonicGodJAMN1yrReplied to Night_Crawler619
where are you Crawler Boi? It's the 15th now!
(A/N: This is just a prologue, as the title says, so it's not important to the story, but I would suggest reading it… or not. - DemonicGodJAMN1yrPosted
This book starts off really well from both an objective standpoint and my own personal standpoint. The book starts off strong by making bringing the author in to know about who the mc is, Emilia Snow. And while sometimes this doesn't work out for novels, it's executed perfectly by GoddessKarma. The characters are well fleshed out and gives off a different vibe from one another, making them feel more realistic and worthy of being remembered. The world background is complex in terms of depth but easy to understand for new readers to the trope. The romance being developed feels natural and flows smoothly with the plot, and the jokes are funny and well thought out. Overall I'd definitely recommend this to anyone who loves romance novels!
- DemonicGodJAMN1yrCommented
Yasssssssssssss gotta enjoy the new training partner
"Brother!" She shouts gleefully. Winston hisses quietly in annoyance. "Hey sis, what's going on? You seem pretty cheerful today, was the mall that fun?" Isaac asks with an amused chuckle. "I suppose you could say I enjoyed myself. But that's not what's important right now! This guy is Winston, you'll be training him starting today. He said he wants to see just how strong a Rose prince could possibly be." Emilia laughs menacingly. "You don't say? Perfect timing, I was looking for a new sparring partner after the last one got sent to the hospital." Isaac says bashfully. - DemonicGodJAMN1yrReplied to Night_Crawler619
Good luck with exams bro! btw, you’ll have a lot of news to come back to once the 15th comes lol
(A/N: This is just a prologue, as the title says, so it's not important to the story, but I would suggest reading it… or not. - DemonicGodJAMN1yrCommentedCh 1 The Beginning
- DemonicGodJAMN1yrReplied to usha412Ch 9 The Secret of Mount Song
- DemonicGodJAMN1yrReplied to GifflarGod
I tried, it didn’t work unfortunately
The Mount Song Sect's teachings were focused on bringing cultivators to the stage of immortality so they could face the tribulations given by the Other Side so they can ascend. Whilst the Orthodox and Unorthodox practitioners only worry about their own strength and the political power of their sects. - DemonicGodJAMN1yrReplied to GifflarGod
The wuxia tag doesn’t exist anymore, it’s just the action tag which is already on the novel
The Mount Song Sect's teachings were focused on bringing cultivators to the stage of immortality so they could face the tribulations given by the Other Side so they can ascend. Whilst the Orthodox and Unorthodox practitioners only worry about their own strength and the political power of their sects.