Sleeping_Giant
Omnipotence, omniscience, and omnipresence, a being never meant to exist for infinity never belongs to a cycle which the creation of life and the inevitable end are present
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Countless timelines each and every one unique and special in their very way. Their race, ego, personality may differ but they remain the existence of The Author of the book "Sometimes it takes a depressed bimbo to save the world," Christina Morris
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Their body parts were disemboweled the moment they reached his body's range
Yeah but he retcon that part and didnt add that on the story
Its the future we can't escape
It's a hit-and-miss opportunity it would be great if I postponed it but that'll just lengthen the beginning. I did have an idea for a slow start, but I think the reason why I rushed it was for his main goal, to survive. Still, I do think it was a bit too early as well, I should've let him grow out his roots and personality
I never added it but the broadcasting was only in effect when he was fighting the Goblin King
Need more material on the matter
Still in production
Chapters 100 has a moment where Jin mentions someone with the name starting from RI hinted about it but I think it wasnt that noticeable so I can see why you're confuseI think it was the chapter hidden passage [1] and she was also teased in the end of the first when they raided the guildIts a teensy bit of details so I can't blame you
Hmmm gonna happen after the start of the 4th arc. I'm closing in on the 3rd arcs finale but havent have the time. I wish exams are like monstersI wish I can beat those papers like a rampaging beast. There wont be chaps this week. Memorizing stuff brain can't think of writingI'll make sure to work hard so there's no make up test and can go back on my hobby
Writing style is great, very detailed, there's really no problem whatsoever, but I do feel like its kind of rushed Dont get me wrong the story is good, but I think it'll be much better to start of with an introduction Its good to summarize something but it can be both good and bad but in tje first chapter the intro takes more focus Keep up it up
Thank you for the praise but I dont think I deserve it. It's pretty sad I'll have to postpone the book. I didn't get tired of it but school's coming and its busier since its college. The early chapter was made mostly on my vacation. You could see how cpanky tue writing was but I did enjoy learning and changing my mistakes. But I can confidently say I won't be dropping this book even though I can't write the chapters continuation doednt dwindle. Thank you for your review. Most of my readers aren't that interactive so I thought their a bunch of bots
The mc is quite pitiable but he doesnt go off mentioning a known fact. His survivability is reasonable and the way he utilize his ability is great. The choreography of the fight was well written and I can imagine whats happening with such detail. All in all you could see the blood and sweat in every paragraph where you don't mostly see in a novel
Mixed emotions, he's serious, some times stressed, and mentally unstable... I don't know how it got there but it didn't have a negative effect so I went with the flow. He's mostly pissy manipulative and possibly psychotic.