1King_Rep1
great story overall. I like the idea of having multiple characters being in the spotlight but I think the character development is a little slow because mc has an overpowered ability but does not use it to the fullest. Also in my opinion I believe the side missions take up a lot of chapters which makes it feel stale sometimes but it also adds to world background and more details overall to the story. solid read
I'm gonna give all 5 stars as a sign of support for the Author. Don't get me wrong, I like the novel so far. The world building is great, character development for the MC and friends is a bit vanilla but nothing bad. As you read the writing quality does improve. So for the readers out there, don't be turn off by the bad writing quality in the beginning. However, to the author, please get your editor to edit the first 200 chapters again. I don't know how much they cost, and I'm sure they might not be as cheap as I think it is, but you're losing a lot of potential readers from the first 200 chapters. It is not the worst writing quality, but because of the many grammatical mistakes in the first 200 chapters, it spoils the flow when you're reading the novel. Honestly it was quite the turn off. BUT, it does get better at 200+. I'm guessing, an editor came along and helped out. So please, get the editor to redo the first 200 chapters. I assure you, your readers will love you. Best of luck, cheers.
Terrible with character designs, how the world looks, time, and some plots but still enjoyable. If you can also ignore the basically constant grammar mistakes!While you might not mention skin tones to try and not be racist it is a major part of a character's design. You also never described the main MC(Walker), at least in the beginning. Maybe later you say more with him but this is over a thousand chapters in at that point.Aftet saying multiple of the issues to someone, they actually asked me why I'm still reading it due to how many flaws I listed.
Pretty good overall, I really find the whole everyone has a system interesting. Imo, the mc having a jack of all trades system is great. A perfect system for a main character, op but not too op that the enemy doesn't stand a chance, and you can also see the limitations of the system early on, idk if it will be overcome in the future, i haven't reached that part yet. My biggest gripes about the story is that the characters especially side characters acted like npcs like their actions/reactions revolves around their template so oftentimes i feel the interactions shallow or rigid especially when the story are more of tell than show. Like this character has this kind of personality or that character did an action and that becomes their whole personality. Tbh im hoping this will improve as i read because I'm really into this story
This story is simply a delight. The author has created a vast and diverse world and characters that draw you into it. While the focus is on the main character, none of the supporting cast is left underdeveloped. The author even has a mini story about a character that the group has only met once that is wonderfully written. The only thing I marked down for (though I wish I could only take 1/2 a star) is that there are a few spelling issues. I get that they happen, but when you find a jumbled word, or a different character name in place is one, it can break the flow and immersion. Otherwise, I am about 1500 chapters in, and am begging for more faster!
I needed a fantasy book to use up the bunch of fantasy FP I'd received from contest. I picked this just because I liked the title. I really lucked out. I can't stop reading. there are some grammatical errors but the characters are do engaging you just read over them . The world building is excellent and well thought out. best system storyvive read . thanks Author 😊