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Master_Axis

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2020-06-06 JoinedGlobal
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  • Master_Axis
    Master_Axis3mth
    Commented

    this is a repeat paragraph

    After walking for a minute, Evan stopped in front of a training room. He looked towards the training room and saw, Puppet Sparring Room written on it.
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    Necromancer Of The Shadows
    Fantasy · Zero_writer
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  • Master_Axis
    Master_Axis3mth
    Replied to Dallank1221

    or could be "he's stronger now" drop the much/more

    These two effortful motions would have left him wanting in strength but with 52 percent of his cells active, he was more stronger now.
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    I Regenerate 10,000 Times Faster
    Fantasy · RagingArtPunk
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    Master_Axis4mth
    Posted

    its a great story. I love all the characters so far.my only problem is the amount of typos that have been left and not corrected even though people have commented on them.but overall a amazing book and the author is doing amazing.

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    Master of none
    Fantasy · 1King_Rep1
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    Master_Axis1yr
    Posted

    the book is very good overall and I congratulat the author for being able to get ideas out and make them live. there are many grammar mistakes and having the before names throws things off for me as a reader. I feel that if the Grammer and the "the" before names were fixed it could be a superb novel.

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    Dual Cultivator Reborn[System In The Cultivation World]
    Fantasy · SHIVAM_Chouksey
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    Master_Axis1yr
    Commented

    The author needs to stop with The names having the before people's names is a bit annoying. do you say the before all your friends/family's name?

    Neena smiled towards the jasmine as jasmine was sitting beside Neena's bed.
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    Dual Cultivator Reborn[System In The Cultivation World]
    Fantasy · SHIVAM_Chouksey
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    Master_Axis2yr
    Commented

    I believe this should be Annalise

    'The Inherent Skills of this Realm are too different...but I can see Rose eventually being able to command the Ice Element to possibly freeze entire regions in the future…'
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    My Idle Gaming System
    Games · Adui
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  • Master_Axis
    Master_Axis2yr
    Commented

    what happened to sweep the world? why is he now called super powerful?

    "You are Super Powerful."
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    Pet Beasts of the World: Hundred-Fold Multiplier System
    Eastern · Fifty Bucks for A Thousand Words
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