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this is a repeat paragraph
or could be "he's stronger now" drop the much/more
the book is very good overall and I congratulat the author for being able to get ideas out and make them live. there are many grammar mistakes and having the before names throws things off for me as a reader. I feel that if the Grammer and the "the" before names were fixed it could be a superb novel.
The author needs to stop with The names having the before people's names is a bit annoying. do you say the before all your friends/family's name?
I believe this should be Annalise
what happened to sweep the world? why is he now called super powerful?