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I'm gonna give all 5 stars as a sign of support for the Author. Don't get me wrong, I like the novel so far. The world building is great, character development for the MC and friends is a bit vanilla but nothing bad. As you read the writing quality does improve. So for the readers out there, don't be turn off by the bad writing quality in the beginning. However, to the author, please get your editor to edit the first 200 chapters again. I don't know how much they cost, and I'm sure they might not be as cheap as I think it is, but you're losing a lot of potential readers from the first 200 chapters. It is not the worst writing quality, but because of the many grammatical mistakes in the first 200 chapters, it spoils the flow when you're reading the novel. Honestly it was quite the turn off. BUT, it does get better at 200+. I'm guessing, an editor came along and helped out. So please, get the editor to redo the first 200 chapters. I assure you, your readers will love you. Best of luck, cheers.

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