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It's day. Thank you for pointed it out for me! It's been fixed now :D
Thanks for pointing it out to me! :D
Fun fact! Red light is the weakest type of light, while purple is actually the strongest. It has to do with wavelength stuff for how light actually works. I don't know exact stuff...
Uh... Current and their champion were here as well. It's how they learned about the kraken infestation in the first place.
Despite asking the royal Earth dragon directly to come and none of the others...
THEY HAVE GOOGLE?!Lol I know it's supposed to be giggle but still that is a funny typo
"never made things for dragons before" WHAT?! Later, you say that while he was working in the volcano before meeting the party, he met the royal fire dragon and made him some armor. Something Ignus bragged about!!!Keep your own story straight, geez...
I would say more grandpa and aunt.
Given the fact that the rewards can be something like a gift from someone else a better to say would have been "The Weapon" or "The Forged Weapon" as that will be the final result of this chain quest and the reward of their labor.
Terrible with character designs, how the world looks, time, and some plots but still enjoyable. If you can also ignore the basically constant grammar mistakes!While you might not mention skin tones to try and not be racist it is a major part of a character's design. You also never described the main MC(Walker), at least in the beginning. Maybe later you say more with him but this is over a thousand chapters in at that point.Aftet saying multiple of the issues to someone, they actually asked me why I'm still reading it due to how many flaws I listed.
I'm really happy with how the ship was settled. Most of the time it's a "will they won't they?!" thing, confess in some dramatic moment when the other could die or is really hurt, or lastly some synanagins/miscommunication causes a rift between them and fix it by getting together. It's refreshing and nice to see it being handled calmly with no need for something dramatic. This is great as well!!!
REALLY?! I'm genuinely shocked! Because when ya'll were in the catacombs for about a month and a half(Two day travel to get there. One day preparing. One day actually fighting. Then two more days to get back. And you got there with a week to spare. The time limit was 2 months!) You guys took one break in total. We might not know how long of a break it was but still by timing when your hungry it should've been easy enough.
A lot of the characters aren't enjoyable to read. It started out fine enough but as they started to focus more on the characters are the MC in his real life it turned bad. The sister and the cops aren't well written at all. I fully get what they were going for with the sister, even if they faily horriblely, and have seen it done well elsewhere. Then as this comes from China there's a TON of Chinese propaganda as well. Really interesting premise just horrible execution.
I mean it's not like the author us the best at sharing what characters look like. For one we have no idea what most characters skin tones are actually like. Plus if you go back to when Su, Remy, and Gil are first introduced we don't know their eye color nor alot of other important details. Like was Su's armor iron, gold, or something else? We never really get a good veiw on how anyone really looks.
Su is the "non-dragon" (as it has been said that the amount of dragon blood could become more than human so she could be a false dragon) And Walker is more of a non-race, as he could be basically any of them and learn every skill.
Why does she have a buzz cut exactly? I mean really barely reaches the tops of her ears? That's so short! You, Author, really seem to love super short hair...
I love the use of telling what Halloween(as that's basically what this is we can all admit that, right?) costumes originally were for. Very few people seem to know...
I'm just thinking of if the next time Walker and the rest meet the rabbit clan and he tells them that he almst learned their once every fifty years skill that one of their top warriors Ots(?) has been training to gain for so long and Walker had only helped lush him towards it more the last time they 'danced'.