author are you alive? i don't want to rush you but if you take a break or are discontinuing the story please say so/make a author note chapter pls. but besides that still a awsome story one of the best Percy jackson storys.

awsome story i hope to see more of it. (but dont over work yourself)

can't give it a real star score yet but if i look at your Percy Jackson story i know it will be good (sorry if that gives pressior) and you have captured my interest, i hope to see more of this. and this first chapter was good.

thx for the notice 👍

its been 10 months is this story discontinu?

nice chapter love that Natsumi is going with King also good idea of making Natsumi a legacy of a luck goddess in other fanfiction Naruto is almost always said to have the devil's luck, now its Natsumi and she has a goddesses luck.

i say bring her along, it will feel (atleast to me) that she was added in and got a crush on King for noting if we leave her behind.(as always awsome chapter)

as always awsome chapter, love what you are doing and hope to see the next chapter soon (but don't over work yourself)

love the chapter, i think it is a fantastic idee to have natsume go back with king to the percy jackson world, but many place some seal on here, in secret or with her permission as protection just to be safe from powerfull monster.

awesome chapter like super cool also different from your old wattpad version but i like this version better so good job, also i would like it if King was in they exam BUT maybe have him sit by the hokage or Mei the Mizokage if she will be there.

Look i love your fanfiction the first Fox's gift is a master piece but if you are going on hiatus, discontinu or just give up atleast let us know. so we don't have to keep out hopes up.

love the story pls update it. i cant wait for the next chapter its been 8 months

read your story on wattpad and absolutlie love it, thx for uploading it on webnovel.

Hi Author, just want to say great book, absolute love it, but i have a question if somebody could awnser, i am re reading the book last time i was at the dwarves, and then stoped but i am now at the forest elf arc, and can't seem to find him telling the human king, elf Queen and demi-human king about the sin demon (gluttony) skill, does he not tell them or what?

i love this fanfiction its just good and something i have never seen/read before so i hope you keep up te goed work and continue making nieuw chapters, but take your time and don't overwork your self.

yo this is a super goed story, i am not going to lie the writing quality is not the best but its good enough, but i never read anything like this, I LOVE IT!!!!, but don't over do it, make your own plans and tempo, dont over work youself.

i am guessing this amazing story is dropped/discontinued. i really like this story shame. it no longer geting updates. i wil miss this story.