Pretty good overall, I really find the whole everyone has a system interesting. Imo, the mc having a jack of all trades system is great. A perfect system for a main character, op but not too op that the enemy doesn't stand a chance, and you can also see the limitations of the system early on, idk if it will be overcome in the future, i haven't reached that part yet. My biggest gripes about the story is that the characters especially side characters acted like npcs like their actions/reactions revolves around their template so oftentimes i feel the interactions shallow or rigid especially when the story are more of tell than show. Like this character has this kind of personality or that character did an action and that becomes their whole personality. Tbh im hoping this will improve as i read because I'm really into this story
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