Reviews of Game Of Thrones: Baratheon The Schemer

Give this novel a read till chapter 50 then decide whether you want to read or not. All the other reviews threw me off when i first started reading but when i read some chapter i instantly liked it. I find the MC reasonable and he is not a beta isekai mc which is a huge plus point in my opinion. (I wrote this reviews as it might encourage the author to write more, cause i don't want this to be dropped, then i would be very sad if it did dropped ) (sry for my english)

I only have 2 things to say about this fan fic: 1: the MC is trash 2: ignoring the trash MC, the novel itself is good. .. .. .. .. .. .. .. .

Although this is good I couldn't seem to enjoy reading it. Every word I read is like torture to me. Even a lion won't eat or harm its children, and I always didn't like the world view of the mc who see pros and cons. There's always something in the world that couldn't be measure by value.

I like the MC till he have a family.... The MC doesn't care about anybody or anything in the world but himself.....a hypocrite who said he doing everything for "his family" by pushing them on

Started off as a great read but went downhill once he met his lady wife. The protagonist is supposedly scheming and calm headed yet he does irrational things that make no sense compared to the character he showed at the beginning. It's almost as if this was written by different people honestly.

I always feel like he was completely doing nonsense things and the people he wants to kill those people who he don't like are angels compare to him

The story immediately sets the mc to be unlikeable/unreasonable from the start. His perspective and goals are immature especially for someone who has reincarnated with an ADULT mindset already... From the very start he already plans to eliminate characters, whom at the time, havent even grown into their personalities within the books/show. He currently doesnt have any redeeming qualities that makes me want to follow his journey through Westeros.

Writing Quality 3-Stars Story Development 3-Stars Character Design 2-Stars Updating Stability 5-Stars World Background 2-Stars I will not go much into detail, I will just make an overall-statement and say some things that were on my mind for a very long time now. First of all, there are a lot of mistakes, ...grammar-wise, word-wise, logic-wise etc. The author, for example, changes the Names of people very often, by mistake. If he, for example, talks with a certain person( let's take Tywin) then the next paragraph, it is written down that he talks with Clinn even thought it is still Tywin....which makes it confusing at times.....in it happens a lot...if you get what I mean. Logical-wise.....this is far way from reality and talking about actions people take and what is possible.....what is apparently everything for our Mary-sue character. It's also kinda cringy, at more than one point in the Story. I could go on and on, but there were people that already mentioned a lot of the mistakes and errors the author made, so it's kinda useless for me to write them down again. Yeah......bye ;)

I think the narrative choice of telling the story in a series flashback is terrible for a chapter by chapter story release it makes the reader feel like the story stopped moving, and most of the time you only can have shallow understandsing of what hapenned because the author just glosses over the event and says we will talk about it in detail at a different time but how can that be interesting when the suspense surrounding the events is taken away, when we already know the outcome and even what hapenned grosly. verry unfortunate choice, because the characters depiction is pretty good but when you have a series of flashback that are glossed over constantly it kind of kills the story and stalls it

don't worry author. I am loving the backstory and other characters povs. don't worry author. I am loving the backstory and other characters povs.don't worry author. I am loving the backstory and other characters povs.

Wow. 15 Years time skip. Didnt expect that. Great btw. I hope he skins joffery alive......................................m................

I really like your story.It is my personal belief that your fanfic has great potential and I really enjoyed it because it has all that I would want in such a story. The mc is strong and independent, it isn't the save the world bullshit, the mc has ambition rather than going with the flow and I really love the will to leave a legacy behind.

I don't get it. Why is he so obssessed with ruling this piece of shit world? What are you even going to get even if you won? A cutthroat world full of backstabbers, a world in the medieval times, and paperwork for all seven kingdoms where shit goes ballistic everytime a noble's pride get stung. Kill anyone even backstab the people who cares about you just for a world that's only gonna give you a headache to control, as well as develop. What the **** was wrong kneeling? It's just a form of sitting. People are the only ones who gives them value. Pride? What's that? Isn't that just another excuse for being a whiny baby about not accepting your circumstances as a weak human who can't do shit in the multiverse? It's like giving value to a stone just because someone popular stepped on it. I thought this was going to be a lelouch kind of thing but it's just another smarter mad king or tywin.

The story reminds me of a certain naruto fanfic where the MC is also a schemer. The English is good, I like the way where the MC just focus only to his goal, not doing some shitty stuff like some other fanfic does. i must say, this is a really good fanfic, you got my power stone

Awesome story! 10/10

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I really like the way the way your story is going I can't wait to see what happens with the ships and their first time battling together as a group I wonder if Tywin Lannister is going to try to offer his daughter him to get him on his side but anyways keep up the good work I can't wait to read what happens next

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This is a great story and all but you should give up the hypnosis bit that is pure non sense. how does that even make sense, it is kind of ridiculous.