Inconsistent power level, he make it sound like it's his novel but the problematic details are like mistakes in translation. This is either a fanfic written by someone with short term memory problems or a translation of a Chinese fanfic.

It's been 18 chapters and it's doing pretty good. If this was an original fanfic I'd be more enthusiastic but Chinese fanfics have a habit with sudden shit plots that ruins the story. A friend once told me about a Chinese fanfic that he loves for the first 30 chaps until it turned into full on NTR where all his harem got fucked by his friend repeatedly. So yeah, I just wish this keeps getting better and not turning out like that.

This is awesome!! I just wish he'd have more chemistry with Emma Watson since they're going to have a kissing scene soon. And please add the book relationship between Harry and Ginny

This ability was something new to him, something he and the person he transmigrated into never experienced. a realistic simulation of a character's experience. In some parts of it, it was even mentioned that his character experienced something different from the script given to him. For example, when he used it on Rob Stark's character, instead of simulating the tv series portrayal, he experienced the book version. And when he trained in horse riding, his simulation guided him into being an expert rider, something method acting can't do since it's impossible to be an expert on something he never experienced in both lives before.

It's best if Kat meets her original romantic partner. It feels like the mc is stringing him along with his obliviousness. Plus Heath Ledger's portrayal of that character sounds like a guy that can guide the mc into being a more well rounded person. The mc is great but his naivety needs to stop cause the tv series connected to his life is not sunshine and rainbows especially if he wants to get rich. And yeah, House can do that but it's better if it's from someone in his own age who can still have relatively good heart despite the shit that goes on in his life. House can't do that since he's too busy wallowing in his pain, Alex has way too many issues and secrets to actually help. It needs to be someone who'd give it to him straight.

If he get the acting job for John Wick or Iron Man, will he also get their skills since with his cheat, he's actually experiencing the actual character.

He'll need to change his hair color and wear some contacts cause he's the poster boy for a Lannister hahahahaha!!!

I can't wait for the mc to insert himself in the Hunger Games and put a better spin on the male lead!!!

This is a sequel dumbass. The first fanfic was a Kuroko no Basket fic.

Dude, unless you kill of wednesday's father, it's impossible. Even then it's still far fetched. That's basically the fundamentals of the Addams family. The Addams family are creepy, violent, rich, and to them, nothing is above family. They'd sooner exterminate everyone else than utterly betray family.

Add "Day Shift" as well so you can flesh out other organizations with specializations

It'd be funny if he comes to worm and basically take every power there since shards are basically crystalline supercomputers. It'd be funnier if Scion finds out that he already solved negentrophy with his perpetual energy.

This fanfic is stolen!!! The real fanfic's title is "A Demon Lord's Hero by Fahad09" This thief was even douchey enough to use Patreon for this stolen fanfic!!! This numbskull even slipped a disclaimer that he doesn't own anything (the thing we usually see in fanfics to avoid copyright from the original owners of the anime etc.) to make an excuse despite not clarifying that he didn't even write anything. What's funny is that despite not owning nor writing anything, he's making money out of this stolen fanfic that is totally free in fanfiction.net

Wow, can't even say what's wrong with the fanfic. Sounds like a personal attack.

This is a stolen fanfic!! The original fanfic is Meddling Giant by cloud9stories in fanfiction. He even created a f*cking Patreon for a stolen fanfic. Wow. Just wow.

Oh, like the Gate of Babylon?Probably, but it's farfetch since she didn't even realize the output would be as strong as she was expecting.There's a way to plug the plot hole though, it could be because of the protego diabolica that most of the pressure was gone and only the leftover water would be left.But there's still a plot hole from that. The steam created from the clash would easily burn someone's flesh off their bones. So technically, everyone except layla should be dead through melted flesh.

That's even worse.The less water that comes out the more pressure it will shoot out. Imagine a hose.It would've been better if she said the bottom of the sea instead of the ocean, since the shallow part near the beach is still considered as the bottom of the sea.

Plot hole: If you open a portal at the bottom of the ocean, the sheer pressure it'll shoot will disintegrate many things much else humans. A waterjet that are used to cut metals have around 30,000 psi to 90,000 psi. At the bottom of the ocean, there is 15,000 psi spread out. By spread out, it means just by being there, you'll be crushed by 15,000 psi equally. Imagine if all that pressure is concentrated in one human sized hole. The burrow should've disintegrated by that point.

Crackfic. Barely any story. The author adds a ridiculous amount of trashy jokes to a point where 80% of the story is jokes. It's the typical isekai experience where the only thing special with the mc is his wishes. But unlike those typical isekai stories this one is full of trashy jokes, an mc that blames/criticizes everyone, and fails even with the minimal plot. He's also a simp.

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