Review Detail of Jasonenrick in Game Of Thrones: Baratheon The Schemer

Writing Quality 3-Stars Story Development 3-Stars Character Design 2-Stars Updating Stability 5-Stars World Background 2-Stars I will not go much into detail, I will just make an overall-statement and say some things that were on my mind for a very long time now. First of all, there are a lot of mistakes, ...grammar-wise, word-wise, logic-wise etc. The author, for example, changes the Names of people very often, by mistake. If he, for example, talks with a certain person( let's take Tywin) then the next paragraph, it is written down that he talks with Clinn even thought it is still Tywin....which makes it confusing at times.....in it happens a lot...if you get what I mean. Logical-wise.....this is far way from reality and talking about actions people take and what is possible.....what is apparently everything for our Mary-sue character. It's also kinda cringy, at more than one point in the Story. I could go on and on, but there were people that already mentioned a lot of the mistakes and errors the author made, so it's kinda useless for me to write them down again. Yeah......bye ;)