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Yans_Tad
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I think the narrative choice of telling the story in a series flashback is terrible for a chapter by chapter story release it makes the reader feel like the story stopped moving, and most of the time you only can have shallow understandsing of what hapenned because the author just glosses over the event and says we will talk about it in detail at a different time but how can that be interesting when the suspense surrounding the events is taken away, when we already know the outcome and even what hapenned grosly. verry unfortunate choice, because the characters depiction is pretty good but when you have a series of flashback that are glossed over constantly it kind of kills the story and stalls it

Game Of Thrones: Baratheon The Schemer

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GNaNA
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Sorry, it was my bad. I just tried to change the style a little which backfired at the end. Don't worry, it will only take five or six chapters before all this style end.

Yans_Tad
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ok nice