Did you hear about the kidnapping at school? #HolyJokerSquat #CornbringerSquat He had a good Dream ;) It was me, and I had a Dream about you liking my profile for no reason at all!
Wanted to add something that I just noticed now.....Why do his soul traits not get stronger? It was shown that other people could get insanely stronger by having more Links of Loyalty as was shown in the first assessment, but apparently, this isn't the case for the Mc because there aren't any improvements shown.
The reason is very simple: Your world-building and consistency is crumbling the more I read ahead. And this is one, if not the biggest problem, a story can have. And you managed to do this quite often. Just by logical thinking many things make no sense and the biggest problem you have is trying to make your Mc seem overpowered and then introducing lousy excuses for others to be as powerful as him. For example: Annable managed to get from Peak Tier 0 to Low Tier 1 Lord, the same rank as Michael even thought he only went from Lowest to Low Tier 1 Lord. What did Michael have to do to achieve this: Kill thousands upon thousands of Tier 1 Monsters and dozen of Tier 2 Monsters. My question: What the hell did she do? Kill some Tier 3 ? Sure........ Makes no sense at all. Like I said, no consistency and making up random things to keep the story alive.
cry more hahha
I hope you are joking...or there is no hope left for you
First of all, I am drunk as hell so sorry for the grammar, but as far as I remember the Mc is transmigrateded into the Body of young Voldemort while the older Voldemort travels Back in time to visit bis younger self and there is the reincarnated Mc who gets sorted into fluffy, sweet Hufflepuff.
You are delusional, aren't you? First of all, your English sucks, get some help. Also, if you really can't see that you are wrong then you really are hopeless.
Apparently, you don't hahaha. I love it when I talk to brain-dead people. They have no arguments and can't accept that they are false. Now my "monkey" fits even more. You are like a child, no arguments, no common sense, but they throw tantrums all the same. "I have no arguments.....so I don't care I am not the wrong one " grow up
No :D. I actually just wrote it for my own enjoyment. I don't even think it's particularly good, but I thought that maybe some other people might enjoy it, so I'm considering posting it. However, I want to continue writing, you know? Build up some puffer before people begin to ask for chapters that I can't provide xD.
Here is the problem you monkey. The Tag was added after he introduced her and many people complained. Think before writing.
Ah, okay. Good to know. I am writing a 'Game of Thrones/A Song of Ice and Fire' fanfic, which has about 100,000 words at the moment, with each chapter containing about 1,200 to 1,500 words. However, till now I was not quite sure how this looks visually. So, thanks to your help :D
everything ? I mean, why would he need to be higher. He is in creative Mode and invincible? Few men are Taler than him. robert is 6`5 as well lol
Wait a Minute. hold up. What is happening here? So Rheager was there when he was born? Okay...And he will be no king but has the biggest claim to the Throne? I am even more confused.
Unlikly to impossible lol
question? Is the question answered If there are other reincarnated people or whatever? Wanna give it another shot, but I need to know that befotehand