mozza_mello
Wow, what a pulsating opening to the story. Only five chapters in but I'm already hooked by the author's vivid descriptions, excellent world building, stellar pacing and top-tier action. Eager to find out more about the protagonist's backstory. I'm sure this one will get even better as the story progresses. Excellent work so far.
This story is truly a hidden jem. I start reading because the reviews are so positive and i never regret reading this masterpiece.Now this has already become my favorite novel 🥰🥰.the romance is just the right amount not too focused but still have here and there enough too make me girnning like crazy and awakening my shipper soul lol🤣😏.Everything is just chef’s kiss👏🏻👏🏻.please keep producing this kind of quality work and please don’t drop this masterpiece in the future thank you🙏🙏.
Great story, doubly so if you enjoy LitRPG!! Writing Quality: It is really clean and pristine. Very professional sounding. The vocabulary is congruent to the setting of the story. There are no unnecessarily complex or flowery language. Very succinct and clear. There is also a humor that the author infused in their writing which is very enjoyable. Cue EDSM! Stability of Update: Regularly updated Story Development: The story is developing nicely. It quickly sets up the main conflict and has a clear direction in mind as it progresses. Character Design: The characters are very smart. Not the usual cardboard cutouts. They are intriguing and you know their motivations clearly. World Background: The world building is great too. As the MC gradually gains experiences, the world too gradually unfolds around her, which is great to see. Overall a very enjoyable and FUNNN read. Thank you so much, author for the hard work. :D
For a novel that has the system tag, this is written well, and it isn't bombarded with RPG elements left and right. Overall the story has a very straightforward and clear direction. My only real criticism is how the protagonist ends up in this whole new world. The very early chapters seems extremely pushed, but the pacing gets more better from Chapter 3 and beyond. Great work author. Keep on writing.
Where do I even start with this review... The author made a masterpiece with this. Not only is the female lead strong, but she also has quite a sense of humor. I'm currently in chapter 13 and I got so impressed with this, I had to stop my reading for a bit to review this. The fight scenes were so well planned and laid out. Each character in the book has a well-described personality that makes this book stand out from the fantasy books I've seen here. If you're contemplating starting this you should! This book makes you feel like you're living through every single moment! Ahh I'm ranting, I just love it that much and I highly recommend
This book is absolute gold. Heck I just binged all the chapters in about half an hour. I never usually read books for that long without taking a break because it normally starts to become boring. With this book the plot is completely unique, which is a great thing because I see to many novels with overused plots these days. The grammar is absolutely amazing and I really admire the writing style it allows us as readers to get the full story in detail while also giving us insight on the characters thoughts. Absolutely amazing. I would give it a million stars if I could.
This is an amazing story. And this is your first? This sounds quite sketchy. Anyway, I bet you had a wild ride writing this story, doing researches, and also nights where you were thinking about your story directions. The MC looks normal. Dimitri, it is alright and I also think those two are most probably going to be a couple in the future. And also a tip, stop writing a chapter at the title because this will confuse some readers, and the chapter numbers are automatic. Carry on, and you will probably get a comic adaptation one day.
I'm usually looking for more description in stories, but your writing style is so unique and the dialogue is so fun that it's just perfect the way it it! I do wish I'd get a bit more insight into the protagonist's thoughts because I simply love her inner monologue regarding the world she finds herself in. It's hilarious! Very well done!