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The unrivaled inflict once again did an engaging story! I like how lively the writing style is! I think this one will have a long adventure ahead, so I will not comment on the story development yet. Looking forward to more chapters!
Very exciting! This is another one of Light_Ray's story about love <3 What I like most about this as I read through the chapters is the excellent pacing. I have observed, from the start, the characters' identities are already depicted, giving the readers hints about what to watch out for in the upcoming chapters. I am expecting more drama soon hehe Great job author <3 [img=recommend]
thanks for your thoughts! based on the custom map that i made, the places are quite near each other. i based the travel time on the topography, the distance between the towns/cities, the real life/ actual time i travel from town to town, and some references i searched from the internet. i hope i can show the map but because of webnovel's limited features, i couldn't paste it on the chapter. thank you very much for your comment! ^^,
I like the author's storytelling technique. It's like I am reading something out of my diary when I was in highschool. The opening paragraphs made me excited. It got me thinking, how will the main character get her heart broken, and how will she handle it? I look forward to more of this story, and I wonder how the male and female lead will develop feelings for one another. For now, my only suggestion/comment is adding more descriptions of the setting. Good job and Good luck in WSA author-chan <3