Review Detail of TaintedMetal in Earth's Doom Starts with... Me?
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For a novel that has the system tag, this is written well, and it isn't bombarded with RPG elements left and right. Overall the story has a very straightforward and clear direction. My only real criticism is how the protagonist ends up in this whole new world. The very early chapters seems extremely pushed, but the pacing gets more better from Chapter 3 and beyond. Great work author. Keep on writing.
Earth's Doom Starts with... Me?
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Kyaaa thank you so so muchhh <3 I'm really glad that you enjoyed the lack of 'shoving-rpg-in-your-face' HEHE! :D As for the how, it would be unfolded slowly as it's a key element in the plot! But I can see your point hehe! Might be too vague huhu Hope you'll enjoy the next chappies too! Thank you again for reading and have a great dayyy! <333