The story is a great start and shows promises that can become even greater in the future. The perspective of the story is in first person and its so well detailed and written. I hope that this story continues to see how it will progress

It took me awhile to read this all. Had to go back and fort to understand each moment. The story is good, but the writhing needs a few adjustments. Then there another thing that picked up my interest and was the multiple ways of the narrative going back and fort from third person to first person and it becomes too confusing from time to time. But aside from that, the story was great so far as I could tell.

Thank you for pointing it out with your honest review. I will start the fix as soon as I can while trying to adjust the story flow around the beginning chapters.

To be honest, the story is alright, but it is hard to notice the dialogue in some chapters. The narrative has a good flow, and each character has their moments to shine. How the story goes off from the start seems like a quest guide on what’s the current aim for the mc to achieve. Aside from that, some sections amongst the chapters could have used a lot of work, but it is still a good story to read.

There are two parts that I liked in this chapter that made me like it completely. The first around the exercise bit while the second is around when the mc got captured, adding more plot into the story. / Hay dos partes que me gustaron en este capítulo que me hicieron gustar por completo. El primero alrededor del en el momento de ejercicio, mientras que el segundo es alrededor de cuando el protagonita fue capturado, agregando más trama a la historia.

With honesty. The story is fantastic, and I enjoyed reading it. Please keep up the great work and don’t stop writhing. The story starting out from a vr game is truly interesting and I can’t wait for the character development.

Loved this chapter and I will still keep reading

Ima have to go with the answer A and D for that question. The people around us that we do live with is what defines us at some point. Even to our neighbors, friends or even distant relatives.

Dear author, I must say that u have done a great job once again in making an excellent story. Keep up the great work and one day we will see this book alongside many others at the top.

I shall give my support. I'm sorry if I didn't respond in the moment this message got to me.

I must say that this story is very unique and interesting. The author did an outstanding work. Truly showing their creativity and skills to their full potential. Readers, if you come across this novel, please give it a read and show your support to the author.

Another very unique story by the author. You are doing a great job and I hope that you keep on writing. I wish I could read more, but patience is always a key. Readers, please give the author some support in this novel.

From the bottom of my heart. I must say that this story is very unique and that the author is doing an awesome work. Readers, please give the author some support in this novel.

This story is amazing!! The author did a great work and I would recommend to give it a read. The more I read it, the more makes me wonder how the story will keep developing. Keep up the great work, Author!!

I was only able to read to the third chapter. It almost made me cry on what the mc was going through. This book will be greatly recommend. You as well made and amazing job author, so keep up the good work!!

The story is amazing. I must say that you are doing a great job as writer. The mc with the ability of creation it is interesting and way over powered. And I hope you keep on writhing. Keep up the good work, Author. Also, theirs some fixing that needs to be done, but take your time.

This is an outstanding story!! I would like to read even more now. I am as well a fan of sci-fi genre, and I got to say. You are doing a great job. So don't dare to stop now. Keep up going for that your story can show it's true colors.

Another interesting book once again. You keep amazing me every time you make a new book that is related to each other. Keep on staying inspired and determined, keep showing everyone your creativity. And also, the story is going great so keep up the awesome work!!

Ok. I'll see what I can do about that to improve.

I must say that the story is very interesting. The quality of your writhing it is great. And I felt heartbroken when it all went to the old traditions. But as for the rest, I like how the characters are expressed, and that I know that the story will be developing into something far more to other expectations. And also, keep up the good work because you just gained another follower!!