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Whannmarie

Whannmarie

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2021-03-07 JoinedJamaica
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  • Whannmarie
    Whannmarie3yr
    Commented

    Coming soon. I apologize for the late reply. I have been having internet issues but now I am back on track and ready to publish more

    Ch 5 The High Demon Caliko
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    Fantasy · Whannmarie
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  • Whannmarie
    Whannmarie3yr
    Replied to CodeyVanilla

    Aww thank you so much. I am always glad to hear that the readers have enjoyed what I wrote

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  • Whannmarie
    Whannmarie3yr
    Posted

    Wow just wow. There aren't many books that can leave me speechless but this one is the newest ace in the deck. I am absolutely amazed at how well you express the characters thoughts and emotions. Most writers have issues expressing emotions in regular books and yet you expressed them effortlessly and in a Martial arts book no less. The fact that the plot is complex makes me love this even more. Most books nowadays are plagued with simplistic, used up, predictable plots that leave me bored. This story had me glued to it for an hour with no breaks. It just had me wanting more and more of it. Absolutely brilliant.

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    City of Vengeance
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  • Whannmarie
    Whannmarie3yr
    Posted

    In my opinion this is very well written. I find the characters to be so relatable and I love the fact that there is a lot of emotion in this particular story. Some authors write books that hardly portray emotions properly because it is quite hard to do so through words. You managed to do that beautifully and effortlessly. I am also glad that I did not once feel bored while reading this. This story really makes you want to stick to it till the end.[img=recommend]

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    Secret Love
    Urban · CodeyVanilla
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  • Whannmarie
    Whannmarie3yr
    Replied to Easy_Tiger

    Thank you so much for the review. I am always happy to hear that from readers as it helps me to better develop and grow especially as a beginner author. The whole dialogue thing was just to test the waters. This is my first book and I have no idea which style readers would like more so I thought I would try both and see which one readers would prefer more.

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  • Whannmarie
    Whannmarie3yr
    Posted

    This book is absolute gold. Heck I just binged all the chapters in about half an hour. I never usually read books for that long without taking a break because it normally starts to become boring. With this book the plot is completely unique, which is a great thing because I see to many novels with overused plots these days. The grammar is absolutely amazing and I really admire the writing style it allows us as readers to get the full story in detail while also giving us insight on the characters thoughts. Absolutely amazing. I would give it a million stars if I could.

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    Earth's Doom Starts with... Me?
    Fantasy · mozza_mello
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  • Whannmarie
    Whannmarie3yr
    Posted

    I really think this story very good and captures the reader's attention. I really liked the fact that it was well thought out and went into great details. There are a few grammatical errors and typos but that is fine of course, next time try a grammar review app to help you out with that. The story outweighs the grammatical errors and typos by far, Although I am a perfectionist, I cannot help but give this story a great review in spite of the errors. I would highly suggest this book to anyone who likes sci-fi. 1d

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    Romania 5th Hunter Team
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  • Whannmarie
    Whannmarie3yr
    Replied to Septic_Red

    Yes it was seriously better in my opinion to start in that manner. This book is certainly more of a memoir explaining the story of a Princess who is half demon, half angel. She then goes on to become someone very powerful so It involves alot of action.

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  • Whannmarie
    Whannmarie3yr
    Replied to

    Thank you very much for the review darling. I will definitley take what you said into account and sorry about the suspense the next chapter will be up in about an hour. I will also add spaces just for your comfort. Remember if there are any other suggestions please feel free to let me know. What my readers think matter to me

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  • Whannmarie
    Whannmarie3yr
    Replied to Septic_Red

    Thank you for the review. It is always nice to know what people think. I want to make the best story possible for true fantasy lovers. The dialogue t is a new thing I wanted to try out to see what reactions it would receive so thanks for the opinion.

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  • Whannmarie
    Whannmarie3yr
    Posted

    I like that I can sort of see the direction in which the plot is heading. The characters were well thought out. The big thing for me is the grammar. Although I do not feel as if English is your main language so that is ok just try an app like grammarly next time so you can correct yourself. Overall an ok story, I would continue reading this.

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  • Whannmarie
    Whannmarie3yr
    Replied to The_Mad_Titan

    Thank you and no you didn't come off too strong I am very glad for the compliment with this being my first real novel and all.

    Ch 1 In the Beginning there was Destiny
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  • Whannmarie
    Whannmarie3yr
    Replied to The_Mad_Titan

    This seriously is my first story. I had written before but never a serious story. Thank you and I will space it

    Ch 1 In the Beginning there was Destiny
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  • Whannmarie
    Whannmarie3yr
    Posted

    I am totally obsessed with this novel. The characters are so well thought out and i especially like the use of greek mythology as a reference. Definitely added to my library as soon as i started to read it. The first chapter gets you hooked onto it like an addict.[img=recommend]

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    The Eye of Zeus
    Fantasy · The_Mad_Titan
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  • Whannmarie
    Whannmarie3yr
    Replied to The_Mad_Titan

    I will be adding chapter 2 tomorrow. Thank you for the review and I am glad you enjoyed it

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