This is an amazing story. And this is your first? This sounds quite sketchy. Anyway, I bet you had a wild ride writing this story, doing researches, and also nights where you were thinking about your story directions. The MC looks normal. Dimitri, it is alright and I also think those two are most probably going to be a couple in the future. And also a tip, stop writing a chapter at the title because this will confuse some readers, and the chapter numbers are automatic. Carry on, and you will probably get a comic adaptation one day.
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LIKEHueheheheh yes this is my first time ever writing a novel! :3 How did you know I did so many random researches? :'D I learned so many useless new info while researching lol like ink mushrooms and stuff HEHE Thank you so so much for spending time to read this! Me appreciate youuu :D and psst comic adaptation? I wish bro huhu ;; u ;; ///