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Vahn was an atypical youth. Due to a rare mutation, his blood had the potential to target and attack ailments within the human body. Touted as a universal cure, people had elevated his status above the norm and given him the classification "Panacea". In the media, he was hailed as a great hero who would usher in a new era or human wellness. However, behind the scenes things weren't so bright. Being a unique individual, Vahn spent his entire youth locked up in a lab with various scientists and research teams using his body and blood to perform endless amounts of experiments. The only solace in his suffering was the various anime and manga made available to him between experiments. He often imagined himself as the protagonist in a world of his own, finally in control of his own destiny. For years he nurtured this desire, until at the age of 14 he died when an organization had tried to kidnap him from the lab... "Finally, I don't have to suffer anymore..." This was Vahn's last thought as he faded into the endless black abyss... "You poor soul." Author's Note: If you would like to support the author and the team behind EPIC and future projects, feel free to check out libraryofakasha.com. There, you can find extra chapters and several other novels posted by myself and a few people from Discord. Cover by Sinlaire, Edited by Frozen: https://www.deviantart.com/sinlaire https://discord.gg/Jwa8PKh New Patreon~! https://www.patreon.com/user?u=14397149 This is a work of fiction that draws heavily upon the original source material of Danmachi. Please support the official release and know I claim no ownership or credit regarding the existence of pre-existing characters or content.

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BNHA: Singularity

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Einlion · Anime & Comics
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I Refuse to Become Scumbag in Tokyo

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BTTH Life Simulator System

What would you do if you were reborn in the world of Battle Through the Heavens without a distinguished background or an elder in your ring and just a decent talent? Luckily, Xiao Ming has awakened the Life Simulator System! [The Life Simulator is on] ... ... [You have experienced an ordinary life.] [Elements are being chosen.] [Currently available: Green Lotus Core Flame, Flame Mantra, Woeful Poison Body.] [Please choose one.] Every seven days, he can choose to extract one of the elements from his life simulation. In this way, Xiao Ming began his ordinary life. --------------------- Support me and get access to additional chapters. www.patreon.com/kisshot -------------------- Disclaimer: I don't own the cover image. If you are the owner and want me to remove it, kindly DM me on Scribble Hub: https://www.scribblehub.com/profile/102727/kisshot/ ------- This is a Translation ------- Original Author: Fish in the Sea of Clouds MTL: https://www.69shu.com/42195/

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4.6

Danmachi: Reborn with EMIYA's Powers

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Psionic (Marvel)

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Naruto: Back in Ancient Times

A young man from the earth after a slightly tragic and short life gets the option of reincarnating into the naruto world with any timeline of his choosing and wishes. Watch as he lives in the world during the era after the Ten-Tails sealing //// I've read a lot of fanfictions on a lot of anime and what they all have in common is that you'd hardly find one that goes ways back. For example, most Naruto fanfiction I've read only features either Minato's generation, Kalashi's generation Itachi's, or Naruto's you'd rarely see anyone about Jiraiya, Tsunade, and Orochimaru's generation not to talk of Madara and Hashirama. I've always been fascinated by the ancient times of almost all anime that has an ancient past. DXD, DC, Marvel, One Piece, Bleach, Tensura, and many more. With this in mind, I decided to write a story from way back in the era of Indra and Ashura. There will be skills from different animes and mangas, just to let you know. The volume two would have lots of characteristics from Cultivation worlds ways of writing. So please, read at your own discretion. Every ability or theory I come up with is what it is. Deal with it like that or don't bother reading at all. Constructive Criticism is very much encouraged however. This is my first novel guys and I don't own the basic principles in the novel. I either borrow or come up with a different one altogether. **** Join my Patre@n at patre@n.com/JoshRichie2 to support my endeavors. There are 100+ chapters there. *** Hope y'all enjoy it.

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3.9

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CURRENT WORLD: One Punch Man I, Asahi was just a filthy rich young master who died? But why I am following the plotline of a third rate novel? Why is this Goddess named Cliche? And wait, this didn't end there. I'm also getting this great system for fulfilling my fantasies. FIRST WORLD: HIGH SCHOOL OF THE DEAD. SECOND WORLD: Irregular In A Magic High School THIRD WORLD: High School DxD FOURTH WORLD: Danmachi FIFTH WORLD: One Punch Man Features: A mc who never rapes. ——— Discord - https://discord.gg/ZPSdwwCXW9

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1 Chs

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4.6
29 Chs
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Aditya_Aprianggi
Aditya_AprianggiLv1Aditya_Aprianggi

Interesting read and I love it so far. A S-I Obito as the main character is something that I always want to read and interested in. I hope it gets better and better [img=recommend]

SimpleReaderPassin
SimpleReaderPassinLv4SimpleReaderPassin

The most satisfying Naruto fanfic in recent times sooooooo -Proper updates -AU=no otsuksukis -about a person transmigrated as Obito The mc's believe at the start might be annoying but it slowly got fixed its really fun story with great easy grammer, nice story development and a cool mc with a really great pace of development and NO he is not shipped with Kushina and not picking girls like potatoes. The mc aint a weak willed person and adapts really fast. AHH i am so hyped about the development SO HERES UR REVIEW:)

Anas_Nazim
Anas_NazimLv4Anas_Nazim

So yeah, I have been reading your story from basically the start. And I like what you did with it. The first few chapters (around 20 to 25) weren’t the best. It was good, as you explained about the world building, the different political factions that the MC needs to look out for, the introduction of other characters (That are not cardboard cut outs, and have their own lives and problems.), explaining why he thinks he could start training later (cause of still feeling that Naruto world works like the real world, of course, we won’t see five-year-old training themselves in the gym.) The later chapters, even the recent ones are just gold. Obito changes quite a lot after the Hospital Incident… he doesn’t want to help people at first… as he wants to survive, but then he looks at all the things that they did for him. And gets grips with the situation and goes for it. Sure he had help for the goat Kagami. I like the character development. How he sees his own flaws in thinking. I really like how you made a believable character. One who does mistakes and learns from them. It was great. And then later on, (after awakening his Sharingan) how people mainly the village and Uchiha clan start treating him differently. How clans that aren’t Uchiha are also expanded on. And I also like what you are doing with the Rokushiki techniques. Not just learning it by yourself, as you are making Might Duy and Guy rework the technique. (Of course, One Piece techniques shouldn't work perfectly right off the bat in the Naruto world, things should be different. And a good fighter can rework it. And I like the concept) All in all a great story. The grammar needs a bit of work. But I can see you fixing things here and there. As a writer myself, I kinda know how it’s hard to fix grammar issues when you are not a native speaker. Anyway, I will like the story to be a non-harm. But you can add two or even three wifus, I don’t think that counts as being in the haram category. But meh… your choice.

Klaymore
KlaymoreLv3Klaymore

It's filler. At least the first 30 chapters or so. Author says they want to set up a few things but it is just repeating the same few things over and over again. Nothing happens. Nothing is set up. Well, a few things are set up, but it could have been done in like 10 chapters instead of 30. So, most of the fanfic is filler. at least in the beginning. might edit the review if things change.

bringer_of_Dusk
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I'm giving your fanfic 5 stars just 'cause you said "NO ALIENS" i f*king hate it when some author add aliens, new clans and they really add some new kind of dojutsu?! they seriously gets annoying as no author bothers explaining too much about the new types of powers they add to AU and How the heck are we readers supposed to know how those powers work i hope that it will be a good one...

Atom_Guy
Atom_GuyLv13Atom_Guy

Reveal spoiler

Anas_Nazim
Anas_NazimLv4Anas_Nazim

Good story. Don't see that many grammer mistakes. A slow paced story, with MC who seems real. It's a bit of slow, but the new chapters had good actions. And I already love Kagami's character, a laid back my type of guy. Gives me Nara vibes. And who's Kunia? A swordswoman? lol, but yeah... she's also good character. Best of all is Grandma Mai, a grandma that's worried about his grandson. So yeah, looking forward to the story.

BookDragonling
BookDragonlingLv4BookDragonling

The story is good. Once you get past chapter 30 the monologues drop considerably so if that's annoying you then just power through. While the sentence structure is fine the author has a habit of butchering words/names or just using completely wrong words throughout the story. So you'll have to decide if that's something you want to deal with.

Akira13
Akira13Lv1Akira13

im dropping at chapter 24. for naruto fanfic, the pace of the story just ain't for me (more slice of life rather than action) another thing is monologue is just to much (imbalance for how little the interaction). anything else is good -4.8 rating cus NO ALIENS

VickyGamer102
VickyGamer102Lv6VickyGamer102

Man, I love this story. The way it's see the world like animated and it's help me imagine action scene in animation in my mind. 🍥🍥🍥🎊🎊🎊

KonanThaUchiha
KonanThaUchihaLv1KonanThaUchiha

-grammar: nice -stability of updates: really good although am eager for more..... -story development: amazing is all I can say! -the mc's character is really interesting, i really like it! he wouldn't ignore anyone in need if he can help! although I like villains more I guess being a good person is not that bad :)(but I still find the too-good ones kind of- .....anyways.....)by the way he has a good grandma I really like her,hehehe... i know why Obito likes helping the eldery now........ one of the best Obito fanfics so far! pls continue author-san!!!!!!

FastestOfAllSperm
FastestOfAllSpermLv2FastestOfAllSperm

The first chapter is too descriptive with unnecessary details. But after that, it was good. It's a pretty solid story with good pacing. Many complain about how slow it is but most good story in this site starts with a slow pace. I have high hope for this story. Keep up the good work. Ps.. Use grammarly. It really helps. Pss. Here's a cat gif

Aronas
AronasLv13Aronas

It is very very good, the only "problem" i could say it has is the length of the chapters, but since the story is good and updates are regular, it is easy to ignore that

Odil
OdilLv14Odil

The idea is good, but the execution is subpar. •Writing Quality: Many, many mistakes. Typos, grammar, and sometimes plain incoherent sentences. Sometimes I questioned wether this was mtl. There doesn't seem to be improvement as of chapter 58. •Story Development: The pace is horrendous. Nothing happens in most chapters, it's just filler with minor events, then a chapter appears where suddenly MC learned new jutsus or some big event happened without us reading about it. The only good ark was the attack on the hospital, where the story seemed to pick up the pace, just to fall flat on its face right after. • Character Design: It varies by huge margins, some characters are well designed, and feel fleshed out, but other times characters are just brushed over, or act out of character. • Updating Stability: As long as author doesn't drop, it's all good. There are quite a few chapter already released, although, again, due to slow pace, it doesn't feel like much happens. •World Background: Quite a few inconsistencies again, but it's a 5 stars just because author got rid of the abomination that is Boruto. No aliens for the win!

avery1
avery1Lv12avery1

Liked all of it, spent all night binge reading so I could finish the story and I don't regret it word count ...........................................

itachi_122
itachi_122Lv4itachi_122

Honestly it's one of the better Naruto fic on this site and has quite well written characters the only problem with this fic is that mc is an oc even though author says he is obito but except his name there is nothing obito in him and as the story is progressing he might not even get kamui which is his most definitive skill without which he can't even be called obito. Except for that this is a good fic. If obito gets kamui I will give it a five star.

Daddy_yhwach
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I'm addicted to dis please don't stop. and yeah it's really gud too. [img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update]

Aggression421
Aggression421Lv13Aggression421

Please don’t delete this story. Even if your not going to update it anymore I still love going back and reading it.

BrandPatriarch
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its goooone, nooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo

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