Review Detail of FastestOfAllSperm in 0000X0000

The first chapter is too descriptive with unnecessary details. But after that, it was good. It's a pretty solid story with good pacing. Many complain about how slow it is but most good story in this site starts with a slow pace. I have high hope for this story. Keep up the good work. Ps.. Use grammarly. It really helps. Pss. Here's a cat gif