Review Detail of Wizzez in Inverse System
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MESSAGE FROM THE AUTHOR: Hey everyone, I hope you guy finds my novel enjoyable! This is my first novel, and as I say in the author's notes, there might be some problems that I'll need to iron out. Nonetheless, I'm happy to receive any comments or questions you guys may have! Anyways, I have made a map of the region for the setting of the novel, hopefully, it'll make things easier to follow! I might edit it later down the line, but for the most part, it'll stay the same! If you feel there's anything contradicting between the story and the map, please let me know so I can fix it!
Inverse System
Wizzez
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Not rude at all! Thanks for the feedback. In the most recent arc, the imperfections of the MC were purposefully excluded, and that's done for a particular reason that will be seen in future chapters. I assure you though, his flaws will become very apparent in the upcoming arc. No spoilers though!
WillowWhisper:Not to be rude but it seems like the main character is just too perfect id love to see a single character flaw.
Wizzez:Not rude at all! Thanks for the feedback. In the most recent arc, the imperfections of the MC were purposefully excluded, and that's done for a particular reason that will be seen in future chapters. I assure you though, his flaws will become very apparent in the upcoming arc. No spoilers though!image
I wouldn't say he has a hero complex at all. He has his own goals and does things to advance those goals. He doesn't care about being a hero, he just wants to fulfill his own ambitions. Of course, he still has emotions, so he's not heartless (So he doesn't kill innocent people for his own goals). He will however kill criminals, so he's not one of those "no killing" protags. I hope that answers your question!
FallenAngeI:Author can you tell me if MC has 'hero complex', or he is more of a neutral?
There is romance in the novel, but the MC isnât gay. Sorry if thatâs what youâre looking for! đ
Zee_k:is there romance in dis novelđ.........and is d mc gay?đđ€đ
awwnđ how sad...........but its still ok thoughđ......but d fl shouldn't be d first girl d mc meets because many novels r always like datđ when d first girl d mc meets helped him a lot and he eventually falls in love with her bla bla blađ.....how common and boringđđ€....it will be interesting if d fl is a different speciesđđ don't disappoint me author ......I will still be supporting u[img=recommend]
Wizzez:There is romance in the novel, but the MC isnât gay. Sorry if thatâs what youâre looking for! đ
