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I think the phrase is, "I hate __(noun/pronoun) with every fiber of my being/body". Fibers are very small and they make up the structure of plants and trees(Humans don't have fibers for their structure rather they have cells). So, if you use 'very fiber' it indicates that the structure of the body is only made out of one fiber, which is wrong.

You should change the verbs into present tense because you already have a "did". You don't say, "I did did it." Rther you say, "I did do it." Double past tense doesn't make sense.

Now I don't like Ethan anymore. He sounds like Jayden from Game's villain. Someone who will pursue every single female character rather than making comrades he can trust.

This feels like the cousin of Adam Warlock.

I think this should be "us" Author

So those will be memories.

Well, it's not like Sirens if it's Absolute Voice. That's just commanding

Well from what I know, Sirens use their voice to enchant people and then they devour them or something.

Yk now that I think about it He looks like Shinnei Nouzen from 86. The only difference is the eyes and scar.

I also hope that you will give time to Sue to adapt to her sudden power-up. Otherwise, it will feel a bit rushed. Also, will her power be like Sirens?

The name of the novel reminds me of the path of pain from Hollow Knight, a great indie game.

Will the marks be a power-up? Like when Aiden uses the mark spreads a bit farther and gets decorated with golden lines representing Durandal's mana and by activating the mark Aiden can use its mana for a few moments.

Do you have schedule?

I hope you continue man. You have deleted and changed the novel 2 times already

I still want Celine to be Aiden's romantic partner.

Gojo?

2 days without update 😐

Wondering what happened to you since you still haven't uploaded.

Are you taking a break?