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Born from Ashes. Betrayed by loved ones. Lord of Demons. Ruler of Hell. I am Ashborn.(~ ̄³ ̄)~ Nice to meet you Fellow Reader!!
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Man this isn't how you state facts, you are telling me to read some other Chinese novels like wow isn't this equivalent to Getting triggered? I'm here on your novel asking you to make mc a lil bit stronger and you.... sigh forget it i understand this is your novel so good luck i was just stating facts
then why bother making a character like that where he can't even surpass the other mc, should have just followed the main plotline so ironic and i didn't mean to offend you, and you yourself said that I'll accept any complaints and now that I'm actually telling you what's wrong with your novel.. yer getting triggered bruh
Plot 4/5 Character Development 5/5 Romance 4/5 (Hated the point where he changed her memories) Comedy 5/5 (It's perfect, not too much) Action Scenes 3/5 (Need more improvement) It's a soild 4. There are a few things that author should work one but still I'm really loving it so far. Author did said it's a HAREM and as a fan of decent harem novels. I think it'll be a good one since author is very skilled in explaining characters.. sigh idk why It's so underrated smh.