I just love reading.
Connections kinda. But other than that, they didn't achieve anything in those chapters. And they didn't get close to each other or anything like that, just few conversations. Idk, it might be just me, but it felt really empty, like he didn't do anything.
Punishment? For telling him about the auction. Great logic
If Kyle took everything to his space it would have been better.
Maybe we don't know enough about him, but this seems out of character to me. He wasn't shown is someone who was that greedy. I have a feeling that this is added for comedic relief but it fails at it.
Alright I will see where it goes, and all of those candidates are good. I can't pick xD
As another reader already said, it will become boring very fast. 4-5 more missions and it will be too repetitive for me to continue. That's why I asked about romance earlier, since it adds more to the novel no matter the novel's origina; genre. You need to either have a 'Hub' world where he stays between missions with other races, mercenaries and such or add something else, or I don't see the novel going for more then 50 chapters
I like that you don't forget about the stockings and high heels in any of the scenes
I have a feeling that he will have long hair in the future xD
I've read it already
Why hide it? Shouldn't he act normally around her?
Just 700 000? No currency at all?