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Firstly...Sorry but I don't really know what level up and etc etc anime are plus nor do I know on which anime this fanfic is based on. But I must say despite all that I really really enjoyed this novel, for me this was a little stress relief and lighthearted novel (I have only read the first few chapters idk if it gets intense in the later parts) I really enjoyed the comical parts a lot, plus the convo between the MC and his teacher about the third partner ( I don't remember the names) "Can he fight?" "No but he can run" this lines were just the best. The overall flow and emotion of the novel was well balanced and the world description, situation are all well described. Last but not the least , Happy Writing Author~~
I think so too...I will just change it~
I know Chinese words have other meaning too but haven't I already written in author note that here the 'Ge' means brother. So, why would there be confusion?
Yeah although idk how bin is written in chinese
Okay this para really made me laugh 😆
And man why didn't you help him?
Haha congrats you got Iskeai!!
So handsome~
Honestly after reading this novel, I feel like I am not capable enough to review it, everything about it is perfect, except for the long para that you can break into smaller para. The story setting, the foreshadowing, the character design, the world building and the suspense is on a whole another level. Seriously till now this is the best Sc-fi novel I have ever read! I am extremely excited to know further about who the real villain is Julia or Thomas ( I just have my doubts on him😉) Also there are some scenes that I found a bit confusing and I have already mentioned them in the comments. Last but not the least, Good Work Author!! Your work really made my day today!
Heath, Julia and Thomas are brothers...but I have my doubts on Thomas rather than on Julia
Here Eden is looking for his parents and friend, so using "Where are you" would be better as using "Look at Me" makes it sound like they can't see Eden...which I believe is not the real scenario.
"Someone she tell him about heath" This line confuses me...
A strong start👏
Haha I understand 😌 very Welll