chat gpt...but conversation should be in brackets []{}()....add some pictures of charcacters too.👏

this ch was too short ...but still thanks for the update .

next chapter plz 🤩

its actually 1 in a several million people as stated by hancock.

if a DXD fanfic is without lemon you might as well quit it 🥴

plz keep the story to main storyline ...not everyone has read all the comics.

just get great sage...then its easy.

angry hulk?

broneze100 silver1000 gold10,000 black gold 100,000 legend 1,000,000

no proper explanation of the character and the background and some random low rank marine officer can use haki...like WTF...only vice admirals can use haki...maybe some rear admiral..the wishes are also bullshit...like who ask to be evil for a wish.🥴🥴

i am confused about his wishes ...whitebeard is 4 years younger than garp.... he introduced as regulas.d teach....and has tremor fruit....who did he replace... whitebeard or teach???? explain properly writer.🤬🤬

fire+wind-inferno magic? fire + earth -lava/magma magic. water +ice -vapour magic? thunder +wind-storm magic?

try something different beside...sword every single fanfic has sword.... halberd is rare.

is it copied from path to power fanfic ?

the worst fic i ever read....mc speaks to himself like an idiot..or author is writing for himself rather than the readers...any dialogue are written as if only he needs to understand.

MC be like: McDonald's or burgerking....let eat pasta 🤣

plz update your one-piece fanfic its awesome.

magic construct would be versatile at the same time not to OP.

this is not interesting idea ....the sorcerer fanfic was awesome....i hope you will update that fic.

it can grant immortality ...thats breaking the laws of reality.... though i don't know why tremor fruit is there? its just a vibration on steroids ...rosinante's calm calm fruit can counter it.