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Item: One piece: The Monarch of the Flames
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the worst fic i ever read....mc speaks to himself like an idiot..or author is writing for himself rather than the readers...any dialogue are written as if only he needs to understand.

One piece: The Monarch of the Flames

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Liked it!

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SHIRO_LEVELINGAuthorSHIRO_LEVELING

My character is crazy, he talks alone because he's crazy during the dialogue with Garp, I wanted to make him understand, but if I didn't manage to get the right message across the story, I apologize

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