my new account is Yuki_09
well if you want male mc that isn't bi or gay, I have this one other fanfic that isn't posted here but on ao3 and wattpad. I might post it here. There is no romance or anything. It's still WIP tho. It's called " Requiem " my wattpad acc is D0pp0k4nnonz4k4 and my ao3 acc is Error_404XP
Your review really hurts me but I understand. Just so you know, I only do as the readers vote. I make Haku a girl because I wanted to make him straight at first. I was doing as the readers want, they wanted harem and I only go with the flow. I'm sorry if I upset you.
I'm surprised you're in for it but ok. I might have some ideas for their romance. Good for you guys who choose this ship
no offense taken lmao, I just failed geography ,math and many more subjects and I'm not gonna lie, humans are stupid.
Dude, he doesn't like the pain that he feel when he died in his dream. He wanted to die 'peacefully' not painfully.
you have the worst act i have ever seen pls
you mean Kiba?
Very good start and I like the how the story goes. You expressed the mc's feeling with details, i love it. keep up the good work author =) [img=recommend]
I really like this story, It's really good and mystery about his past intrigues me. You explain how the character feels very well and I like the story so far. Do your best author =)
I really love the story and the funny way to start the story.I love the character development and the way you explain about the character's past or their emotion.
he's not an orphan actually, he's just passed down from relatives to another. His mother is dead but his father is still alive. He just neglected him but this topic is another time in another chapter. His backstory will be revealed slowly i guess.
I really like the story, it has great story plot, perfect grammars and character development. Glad for censoring the bad words lol. The novel gives me ORV vibes (Omniscient Reader's Viewpoint) \. This novel have a lot of potential and I really enjoy it.
It's a great story and the character's development is also good. There's so many plot twist and the mystery about his past live/incarnation intrigues me. The explanation about the abilities and tiers are understandable. The first few chapters are quite fast paced but it become slow paced in the chapter 11 since it's the beginning of the real story. So far, I really like the story.
It's a good story plot and it's quite interesting. The mc have a great character development. There are some spelling errors and grammatical errors, might want to fix it. Try to use brackets like ( ) or [ ] for the system mission or status plate so they don't mess up with some paragraphs. Label the conversation on who's talking so they know who's talking with the mc for example " are you okay honey?" - Ace's mom. Sorry if you find it quite offending author
Writing skill is great! It express the action,the feelings of the situation and emotions of the characters. The story goes perfectly with the flow and the bit of humor in the story makes it better.