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I know it's difficult to create a story, but there's a lot of difference between a fanfic with an original and creative plot (even if it's bad) and one where the original work is blatantly copied (as in this case). It's okay to support novice writers but not those who just copy and paste. (Google translate)
Seriously? Having the mc join the straw hats is already a bad point for this story; but on top of that the 'author' copies the original dialogues letter by letter? This is absurd. Many Chinese fanfics that follow this same theme do the same, and each of them can be summed up in a single word: Rubbish! (Google translate)
My only problem is the performance of the mc. He mimics Black's style due to his identity as Tenryubito, but was it necessary to mimic Bigmom's traits even when their experiences are totally different? I just hope that the mc has his own personality and not an amalgamation of various characters. (Google translate)
Not just Pokemon fics, most Chinese fanfics pretty much destroy the essence of the original story. The authors change the background of the story, the personalities of the characters, the power levels and so on. (Although in many Webnovel fanfics this also happens) And they also like to transform worlds like One Piece, Fairy Tail, Naruto and so on into something that looks more like a Wuxia/Xianxia story. (Google translate)
I know, as the author said this ff is wish-fulfilment; but what I mean is that in most fanfics the MCs let Orochimaru live. I read one where the MC was a Saiyan but Orochimaru still used his DNA to make clones and stuff like that. It's probably because I'm a bit paranoid when it comes to scientists. (Google translate)
Thanks for the chapter! This is a personal opinion: I don't like it very much when the mc of any naruto fanfic lets Orichimaru live when he has the chance to kill him. Characters like Orochimaru are very insidious and difficult to predict. I know that as a scientist he is very valuable but unless the mc can control him I think getting rid of him is the best option. For example, the final sentence of the chapter is like some kind of 'Flag' that foreshadows some kind of event that will negatively affect the mc or his loved ones. (Google translate)
The forced plots have already begun! I mean, just as the mc sends clones all over the world in search of his clan members, why doesn't he think of leaving several clones in the village to supervise when he's not around? This situation with Kushina was easily avoided but due to the 'plot' it ended up happening just like in the original story. Hopefully the author creates better plot twists in the future and not something as clichéd as this. Thanks for the chapter! (Google translate)
I only hope that in the next chapters we will see a better development of the mc, because until now he has not proven to be the genius of his past life. I mean, during this 'conflict' with the Straw Hats he wasn't very smart at all., from the beginning it was obvious that luffy and the others weren't going to have a good impression of him. Thanks for the chapter! (Google translate)