Review Detail of RCJTheKing in I, Your Father, Carry a Big Stick
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Just a warning for people that are easily annoyed at stuff like this. Hinata and MC were set to be engaged, talks were had and both sides agreed, then Hinata started dating Naruto. Its not ntr because mc doesnt like her but it was still disrespectful to the parties involved and a little selfish of Hinata since she couldve canceled the agreement at any time. Also apparently only 3 girls will be in harem and useless Tenten who only has her looks has taken one spot.
I, Your Father, Carry a Big Stick
Einlion
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Not really, What the point of MC and Hinata getting engaged and Hinata accepting then suddenly she starts dating Naruto? I didn’t read I gathered that information for this comment.
Einlion:There is such tremendous bias in this post.
If you can't bother reading to form your own opinion, I see no reason to go out of my way to explain things. Have a nice day.
Crazy_Penguin:Not really, What the point of MC and Hinata getting engaged and Hinata accepting then suddenly she starts dating Naruto? I didn’t read I gathered that information for this comment.
Einlion:If you can't bother reading to form your own opinion, I see no reason to go out of my way to explain things. Have a nice day.
jajaja yo aqui leyendo reseñas para ver si leo o no las novelas de ein y pinguino_loco a la vez, hasta que veo que ponguino_loco lee a ein.... O_O... hahaha I'm here reading reviews to see if I read or not the novels of ein and pinguino_loco at the same time, until I see that ponguino_loco reads ein.... O_O...
Crazy_Penguin:Well, I was waiting to hear your opinion, to decide if I should read this novel or not.
Bruh, people come to read reviews to decide whether to read it or not, that's the purpose of the reviews. and what this guy said in this review is really disheartening, your opinion as the autthor would be welcome in this case.
Einlion:If you can't bother reading to form your own opinion, I see no reason to go out of my way to explain things. Have a nice day.
People that rely on one or two 'bad' reviews to form an opinion when there are dozens, if not hundreds of positive reviews are just looking for a reason to hate something. It's not like they are paying out of pocket for the novel, so perusing a few chapters to form their own opinion isn't an unreasonable expectation. In fact, if you aren't forming your own opinion about things, just listening to what other people tell you to believe, you are part of the problem with modern society xD...
Barruch:Bruh, people come to read reviews to decide whether to read it or not, that's the purpose of the reviews. and what this guy said in this review is really disheartening, your opinion as the autthor would be welcome in this case.
Einlion:People that rely on one or two 'bad' reviews to form an opinion when there are dozens, if not hundreds of positive reviews are just looking for a reason to hate something. It's not like they are paying out of pocket for the novel, so perusing a few chapters to form their own opinion isn't an unreasonable expectation. In fact, if you aren't forming your own opinion about things, just listening to what other people tell you to believe, you are part of the problem with modern society xD...
If you're worried about whether or not a specific girl will end up with the MC, go write a self-insert. You clearly don't care about the story being told and just want someone else to write your fantasies. I work hard to create an interesting story for my audience. I'm not here to pander to people who can't form legitimate opinions for themselves.
HellDeimoS:So will Hinata be with mc or not?
To be honest, after thinking a little, what annoyed me with Hinata being with Naruto the most is that it doesn't make sense with the flow of the story. She have Zero reason to end up with Naruto (to be honest, most of the original series couple doesn't make sense), it just seem out of nowhere. In a few chapter, the MC help her and show her more care than Naruto in all the original series, his training also help her reconect with her family. Even with the chapter where she agree to the engagment, it seem her feeling are starting to change, to grow, then BOOM the timeskip of 3 years that destroy all the development done previewsly. With their age and how thing developed until that point, it make zero sence for them to be together, even Sakura and Ino seem more forced than anything. After stoping being "fangirl" it wouldn't be long for their interest in Sasuke to stop...
Einlion:If you're worried about whether or not a specific girl will end up with the MC, go write a self-insert. You clearly don't care about the story being told and just want someone else to write your fantasies. I work hard to create an interesting story for my audience. I'm not here to pander to people who can't form legitimate opinions for themselves.
To be honest, I mainly read the bad or moderate reviews because, most of the time, they are the one that argument more. Most of the positive are "I know the author so it will be good" or "more, more, more...". In general, I read those that are more than three line and mean something, most of the time those are the bad or moderate one xD.
Einlion:People that rely on one or two 'bad' reviews to form an opinion when there are dozens, if not hundreds of positive reviews are just looking for a reason to hate something. It's not like they are paying out of pocket for the novel, so perusing a few chapters to form their own opinion isn't an unreasonable expectation. In fact, if you aren't forming your own opinion about things, just listening to what other people tell you to believe, you are part of the problem with modern society xD...
-_- is it so difficult to write one word? "Yes" or "no". I asked such a simple question. But instead, you write this.... And where did I ask to write my fantasies? I didn't ask for that. What's wrong with you, man? You're creating a conflict out of the blue. Everyone has their own tastes. And everyone reads fan fiction according to their tastes and reasons. I hope you understand that.
Einlion:If you're worried about whether or not a specific girl will end up with the MC, go write a self-insert. You clearly don't care about the story being told and just want someone else to write your fantasies. I work hard to create an interesting story for my audience. I'm not here to pander to people who can't form legitimate opinions for themselves.
I totally agree. I don't like this moment either. But the author is trying to convince us of something. The author does not seem to understand that all people have their own tastes and preferences. And this review is written as a warning for people who don't like such things.
Ryofu:To be honest, after thinking a little, what annoyed me with Hinata being with Naruto the most is that it doesn't make sense with the flow of the story. She have Zero reason to end up with Naruto (to be honest, most of the original series couple doesn't make sense), it just seem out of nowhere. In a few chapter, the MC help her and show her more care than Naruto in all the original series, his training also help her reconect with her family. Even with the chapter where she agree to the engagment, it seem her feeling are starting to change, to grow, then BOOM the timeskip of 3 years that destroy all the development done previewsly. With their age and how thing developed until that point, it make zero sence for them to be together, even Sakura and Ino seem more forced than anything. After stoping being "fangirl" it wouldn't be long for their interest in Sasuke to stop...
Izanmi:This is from one of the reviews of his other fanfic, Endless Path. So don't be surprised if something similar happens in this ff. (Google translate)image
The truth is I don't know if it's misinformation or not because I didn't read the novel up to that point, but several readers affirm that it happened.
Einlion:Man, there are still nutjobs like you spreading misinformation around? Get a life.
