Seriously? Having the mc join the straw hats is already a bad point for this story; but on top of that the 'author' copies the original dialogues letter by letter? This is absurd. Many Chinese fanfics that follow this same theme do the same, and each of them can be summed up in a single word: Rubbish! (Google translate)
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LIKEI know it's difficult to create a story, but there's a lot of difference between a fanfic with an original and creative plot (even if it's bad) and one where the original work is blatantly copied (as in this case). It's okay to support novice writers but not those who just copy and paste. (Google translate)
prometheus:and since you're complaining about the author following the original plot, I'm guessing you've probably never written anything and have no idea how hard it is to write a good story with your own original plot
people like it to be familiar I wanted to read one piece fanfic there has to be some one piece in it if it ain't ur taste well, that's alright. Just say Adios
Izanmi:I know it's difficult to create a story, but there's a lot of difference between a fanfic with an original and creative plot (even if it's bad) and one where the original work is blatantly copied (as in this case). It's okay to support novice writers but not those who just copy and paste. (Google translate)