Review Detail of VermaWyrda in Hufflepuff's Champion.

so far so good(chapter 6) i just hope the author wont add in too much love drama, but the story is quite solid so far, it takes quite a few liberty's on harry's innocence but then again this is not a story where we have some one reincarnate as harry, but an au where Lilly potter was able to ambush the dark lord as opposed to being caught unawares...and because of that the story took a drastically different path.... all i can say for those that like reading AU fanfics of harry potter that its something to look out for,(so far)...... i might leave another review on a later date depending on how the story progresses...... ...... now about the star reviews that i gave it here are my picks.... writing quality is 4 stars this is cause i did catch a few minor things but not enough to really nitpick on so 4 stars stability of updates so far is 5 stars, cant really judge this since the story is brand new so i havent seen any other update yet story development is going good so far with an ample drive and pull on the reader, tho there are slight inconsistencies that sometimes make you pull back and reread it to see if you really read what you saw...... character design i gave 3 stars, since well there is no new character design rather then the original characters from jk rowling, however one diminishing aspect i read in the story was how one child of lily evans/potter looked like sirius, i siriously hope she didnt cheat on her husband, that kind of drama is un needed in a harry potter story in my eye's and world background is also a 3 stars for me but made it 4 stars so that the total score is at least 4 on average, the reason being its still jsut hte JK rowling story so far and there hasnt been anything other then that