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Review Detail of ScottyTheD in AS DARKSEID IN MARVEL (OMNIVERSE)

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ScottyTheD
ScottyTheDLv41yrScottyTheD

The people praising this are doing the author a disservice, you need to improve your grammar and spelling. Basic words are spelled wrong and incorrect words are used constantly. The idea for this story is really interesting, but ultimately the writing makes it a chore to read and not worth the headache.

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AS DARKSEID IN MARVEL (OMNIVERSE)

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Replies7

Izanmi
IzanmiLv3Izanmi

I agree. I think it's not an exaggeration to say that I understand an MTL novel better than this ff. (Google translate)

HiTherefic
HiThereficLv3HiTherefic

Its good other than the fact you cant understand anything.

Juhiko
JuhikoLv6Juhiko

how you know is good if you can't understand anything ???????????????????????

HiTherefic:Its good other than the fact you cant understand anything.
HiTherefic
HiThereficLv3HiTherefic

Its hard to explain

Juhiko:how you know is good if you can't understand anything ???????????????????????
Venom_God
Venom_GodLv12Venom_God

wow lol that’s a big L then

Izanmi:I agree. I think it's not an exaggeration to say that I understand an MTL novel better than this ff. (Google translate)
Zenos_Maxima2611
Zenos_Maxima2611Lv1Zenos_Maxima2611

I think that's sarcasm.

Juhiko:how you know is good if you can't understand anything ???????????????????????
TheUltimateP1e
TheUltimateP1eLv4TheUltimateP1e

thx for saving my brain