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    Thanks for the feedback :)

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    Replied to JustThatBoredGuy

    Thanks for the feedback :)

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    Replied to Leo_Micado

    The green eyes came from the mutation. Did I say something diff in other chaps? Also, good to see you around leo, on my new novel :)

    "Err... Is not that Mark?" said John, from inside the truck, because he recognized the green eyes that his friend had recently gained.
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    Replied to James_Jones_4468

    Yeap, is a little redundant I will try to avoid, thanks :)

    Ch 23 Food problem
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    Replied to LegateMattius

    fixed, Thanks :)

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    Replied to MediocreSkater

    You are right, I didn't like the way it ended too, felt odd to me, I will adjust this later. Keep sharing your thoughts :)

    Ch 40 Attacking the Barracks
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    fixed, thanks :)

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    fixed, thanks :)

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    fixed, thanks :)

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    fixed, thanks :)

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    Replied to LegateMattius

    fixed, thanks :)

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    fixed, thanks :)

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    Replied to Osirus1243

    lol thanks I will fix this entire novel in the next month, too much typos and errors.

    A few steps from Jonh, Mack stopped walking, and could see three other guys using the same kind of clothes as Jonh, after all, in an airport, not many people walked 'in a pack' using black suits. 
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    Replied to ilyass_Zzou

    thanks for the feedback :)

    Ch 39 Another way to die (1st person POV - special intro)
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    Replied to fegzzxc

    No problem. feel free to always comment on the novel, I really enjoy reading what the readers think ;)

    "I doubt everyone will react like me. There will be chaos, people committing atrocities, and even people killing themselves and their children in the lack of any kind of hope. After all, what's the point of living when you know you will be dead in 10 years, with no choice? Not everyone is a fighter, or a survivor like me."
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    Replied to MediocreSkater

    thanks already fixed.

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    Replied to MediocreSkater

    Nah, not edgy. I personally dont think anyone can really be evil/bad always/forever, and the same goes for the characters I write. But everyone has 'phases' in life. little spoiler here, but I think is needed as more reader will probably question the same thing when reading this chapter.

    Ch 30 Rage
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    Well, this is my second novel, and I learned a lot during the process, but lets talk about his novel... Its slow paced, the MC will grown from the bottom with barely no advantages, and he will discover how things works along the novel, there is no established system when everything starts, the MC is learning along everyone else, the novel is on Earth during the first or maybe first two arcs, its the growing phase of the MC, and talking about the MC... He is not a dumb MC, but is also young, 19 years, so he is not the most experienced when it comes to schemes/plans (right now), he try to deatach from people for fear of losing them if he grows fond of them, and he is ruthless to his enemyes, a lesson that the apocalypse teached him. The story starts as a normal 'monster invade earth apocalypse', but will quickly evolve in something much more complex. I hope you enjoy the novel, and you can use this review for inquires or just leave a thumbs up ;)

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    Replied to AWeebingRock

    😝

    It was a lot of smoke, even Mark's eyes were already trying to leak water, not cry, leak water, because males don't cry.
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    Replied to fegzzxc

    Its not that he dont care for anyone. He clearly made sacrifices for Frank and he has jane and jonh as friends. He avoids to attach to people (without knowing) because they all die soon or later. Its his way to keep a sane mind shomehow. Also, he gains nothing with the chaos right now, hos only advantage its this bits of knowladge he have. if the info spreads he loses that advantage. but thanks for the feedback i will make those points clearer in the future.

    "I doubt everyone will react like me. There will be chaos, people committing atrocities, and even people killing themselves and their children in the lack of any kind of hope. After all, what's the point of living when you know you will be dead in 10 years, with no choice? Not everyone is a fighter, or a survivor like me."
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