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Dotencsure26dCommentedCh 3 Chapter 3: A desire that went against the law of nature!- Dotencsure26dReplied to Voidking_5059"The girl is from Celestial Palace. I've no idea what that place is, but the way that guard reacted, it certainly isn't any less influential than the Dynasty where 'my father' rules. If that weren't the case, the guard wouldn't be so hasty about getting rid of the woman."
- Dotencsure9mthCommented
I don’t like this, we seriously don’t need romance.
There was concern in the little girl's eyes and Xu Qing was not used to such a gaze. He retreated a few steps and nodded, leaving after saying his thanks. - Dotencsure9mthCommented
Need to eliminate this fear.
Even though he was a cultivator, in the depths of his memory, there was still the fear of cold which had accumulated for years, and this made him feel somewhat uncomfortable in this freezing cold. - Dotencsure9mthReplied to Immortal2021The sun was slowly setting, being covered by the darkness in the far distance at a rate that could be seen by the n*ked eye.
- Dotencsure9mthCommented
Hearth racing? He needs more divinity 😂
'Honesty..' Aucuces took a deep breath, his heart racing. 'How the hell is she that beautiful?' - Dotencsure9mthCommented
Lucas seems more loyal ngl.
'There it is...!' Diana was well aware that whoever she was about to face would be anything but ordinary, and could even be fatal to her. But she knew that this was the only chance that she could advance in her path. - Dotencsure9mthCommented
This is clearly author setting up mc to ‘unintentionally’ help the girl.
Xu Qing coldly looked over and saw the scavenger with a horse face, who was previously berating the little girl, standing there with his hand retracted and looking at him with an astonished expression. - Dotencsure9mthCommentedCh 13 My Treat To You (2)
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Annoying but okay.
"Let us swap." - Dotencsure9mthReplied to LordofRavens
It also sounds wrong in the historical or xianxia context it’s probably a translation error.
As for the person who had spoken in an eccentric way earlier, he was a tall and muscular dude. - Dotencsure9mthReplied to DramaturgiaCh 1 The seed of new hope
- Dotencsure9mthCommented
I can understand considering it’s only a remnant of her true power. But I hope you don’t this when he is facing a true great old one. That would be just ridiculous.
"Even though humanity is small in the infinite cosmos, we are capable of performing impossible feats and miracles when we work together." Aucuces spoke lightly, his gaze fixed on the Aristan. He wasn't surprised by their success now; in fact, he expected it. - Dotencsure9mthReplied to Eren_fraserCh 12 The Plan of Artisan
- Dotencsure9mthCommented
I hope this stays true for future chapters since he is a fusion of eternal blazing and orignal mc
Because he was instinctively indifferent to things that were unrelated to him cos of the vast experience and knowledge he had accumulated in these two lives. - Dotencsure10mthCommentedCh -5 What To Expect From The Book.
- Dotencsure11mthReplied to Leo_Bassist
Ah, I will either update tomorrow or the day after.
"The Straw Hat Pirates was wiped out on Judiciary Island, Captain Luffy, Swordsman Zoro, and Chef Sanji died, and the rest of the crew were arrested." - Dotencsure11mthReplied to Leo_Bassist
Rest have weak combat powers, so not a big threat. And Maybe they get more credit if they capture pirates alive.
"The Straw Hat Pirates was wiped out on Judiciary Island, Captain Luffy, Swordsman Zoro, and Chef Sanji died, and the rest of the crew were arrested."
