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Okay, he is very smart but still baseline human. This should take less time
??? He just rished his graduation, its mot even noteworthy by Lex’s standards. If MC did this at 11, then maybe.
Not really
Feminine*
Most of his costume is blue
Thats a weird question. Kinda like if a human said “was this a trap set by the humans?”
Should have been LuckyDice/LuckyCharm or maybe Gambit or something
I doubt this was actually randomized, would have been more interesting. Also, way too many E for first time bonus
Did he say it with an English “oh, great heavens” accent?
I’d understand if it was for a goth Polish chick
Honestly? I dont mind and it would be annoying to avoid using all his powers in fromntof others. Would kinda boring otherwise, and what MC just said is enough of a reason to his ability be known
Dude this author is ridiculous! Even 2 minutes would be a lot and require him to train and get better, but 10 minutes AND he’s doing it while their are no enemies or danger so he is fully focused? His growth rate would have to be crazy high for him to make this skill usefull immediately.
So they just standing there not saying anything? Author should try envisioning what he writes and reflect if it makes sense or not. Also he should not need oxygen or food while hes inorganic, should probably stop his aging as well (Bobby and Colossus stop aging when transformed).
How tf he knows the exact number of the age range. Just use preteen and teen instead of an exact number.
Is Ororo* The “named” is just weird
Even IRL its pretty bad unless you have access to a good amount of money or very well paying job. Otherwise youre living paycheck to paycheck, so barely living but not thriving.
Bro gotta use grammarly or chatgpt to fix these sentences