Dyrem
i must say i fell in love with this story immediately and will always support the authors decision in this story as he has done an superb job already making readers want more as each chapter catches my interest and leaves open ones imagination for theories of future events (btw i call everyone he at times even if they of other gender even if i shouldn't as its my minds first reaction as of what to say)
Seeing the flag on the cover, I recognized it was one with several aspiring authors with less than desirable English. Fortunately, I don't assume too much, so I read anyway. I was pleasantly surprised. It's a good story overall, and I look forward to more Minor English errors in places, but I think I read less than ten in the whole book that I recall. So that's pretty good. Oh, and I do adore support characters, so it's interesting to me. He's growing op and developing a harem, but no complaints. I enjoy these things when done well. It seems they are being done well to me.
Right, there's several things I don't like about this novel, but all of them revolve around how everyone is keeping the protagonist in the dark about everything. Want to know some of the details of the situation you're about to risk your life over? Have some "cryptic advice" and "mysterious smiles" instead. And despite all this, the protagonist is really active. Like, sure, I've only been in this world for a day, and I learned my only combat skills within a couple hours, but sure, I'll join you in fighting all these soldiers, despite explicitly being a support character. And the romance is a hot mess. - Hello, MC-kun, would you like to become my fiancee? - Sure, pretty girl who I know almost nothing about. I would love to.
Dropped chapter 1 Reasoning and dialogue was jarring to read Female is trying to hard to persuade through reasoning I got impression she thought was complicated but to me was common sense 2. Clearly stated mc can't use his Ability on earth, is on earth yet half way through constantly mcs thoughts are that he is using his ability 3. Adaptability is practical ability but terrible for writing spectrum is to wide to be of interest to read 4. Head teachers clairvoyance is also idiotic - only 30 people to save the world from 30 other worlds if they fail once they all die. I got impression that the head teacher is in truth a frog at bottom of the well 5. Of the 30 people all 30 where willing to travel to another world due to protecting the world 6 every single 1 of the 30 are world class beauties able to topple kingdoms etc etc idiotic
Honestly, this book turned out to be a favorite for me. I will first state I was not able to read it here on webnovel as Im far too poor for that. With that out of the way, let me tell you that this book actually reads like a classic japanese light novel, only the mc gets the girl and keeps on being pretty darn awesome. I really enjoyed the writing style. Clean with succinct descriptions. Not too confusing at all. The world is big and keeps on growing with more and more worlds appearing. Overall a great read.
All in all most of it is great. my only problem is not in the novel itself but your other 18+ work, the difference between them is heaven and Earth and I can't help but to compare them and get disappointed, he has very thing a badass mc should be in a more realistic world but the other is but a boiled eggs, bland and tasteless, I'm not saying it is bad or anything, just that the mc doesn't give any unique qualities where one can get hooked and be interested on knowing more and or join the mc and his endeavors in his path towards a goal of a lifetime. Just my opinion, everybody has different taste, some like it some just doesn't for no reason.
OK then this review is done around the chapter 70s. There are plus points and there are minus points. The writing quality is good not the best but good enough, in fact better than some. The updating of chapters is good and consistent. The problem for me comes from character design. For me the direction in which this story is going needs pretty robust characters and character development. The character design here is not bad. But for the type author is going I believe characters should be more ... complex or well better fleshed out. Same with the world background. It's feeling slow development in some parts and too quick paced in others. I hope this review helps.